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for Ashborn

by Lomonaaeren

schedule March 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
AWWW!!!!!!!

LOVE IT!!!!!!

*worships*
schedule March 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
WHAAAAAHHHHH!

I hate that it's over.

...Oh, wait, I have chocolate ice cream bars in the freezer...

Loved the story, will probably read it again more than once, and now, I go to eat my emotions, LOL!
person angelmuziq
schedule March 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Another great story finished. But plenty more of yours to read. I'm glad that in the end the woman declined Draco's offer. Hehe. Though I suppose he could find someone else to marry in the future but that wont be in this story. ;) Anyway, great story. Please keep writing!
schedule March 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
blinks... i think this is one of your most open ended series to date. they have a lot still to sort through, but now they have each other to lean on so it's all good. I think it was a good place to end it. cheers and kudos.
person AlterEquis
schedule March 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
A but tickling you is at least fun for me and not hurtfull for you, as opposed to slapping.

I vote for a sequel! I've really come to love this odd setup in potterverse. Of all our stories the characters are not the most believable but on the other hand the allience and the setup around it where realy nice. Plus I still have great affection for Corners, I suggest to let him slither in another story!

Cheers
person Mehla_Seraphim
schedule March 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wha? That's it? Aw man. I was hoping Draco would have kids and stuff. I thought this was going to go much longer.
schedule March 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Aww! I'm going to miss this story! I love it soooo much, this is one I'll probably come back to read again later, perhaps a few times. Thank you so much for writing it.
person qwerty
schedule March 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
That ending was rather anti-climatic and abrupt. There's so many things that you could have wrote about 1) what will Draco do now about his reading of the future and the part about marriage/kids now that he was refused? 2) severus and his part in the alliance 3) harry and his school 4) merfolk and other groups eventually becoming part of the alliance

is there any plans to do a sequel?

good story but the ending threw me off
person AlterEquis
schedule March 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Damn right you are!
Slow build up make sit all that more intense.

But I wont hit you, that might impair your writing ability ;)
I might just tickle you instead, much more fun!

Thank you dear.
schedule March 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
AAAHHHHHH!!!!!!!

&$^5&^#$@&#^#$@&$#@&^$*#!!!!!!!!!!!!!

*worships Lomonaaeren*

I'm not worthy, I'm not worthy!

LOL, I love it! Wonderful, and I do believe I'm going to need to give my brain a few hours to un-explode. Plus, I think my laptop is acually SWEATING.

Hot, sexy, and the yummiest thing I've read this last month, if not all year so far. Mmm... Severus... *is craving a good Snarry*