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for The Rise of the Drackens

by StarLightMassacre

person AR
schedule March 31, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Ack! Scary bit at the ending, and I don't like that creepy bit of foreshadowing. Certainly hope you aren't planning on offing Richard any time in the next hundred so-odd years. I like the darling!

Love it when Harry gets all defensive of his mates and mateship. ^_^ I agree with Harry, though--it's annoying when others don't keep well-enough up with the gossip to know one or another is already mated. I'm actually a little surprised there there aren't special rings or bangles or some other accessory to denote a mated submissive or pregnant submissive.

Nice slip-stream chapter that got us closer to the end of the school year. Yes, the stress is getting a bit much, but then again, being as it's almost April in the states, the teachers and students are all counting down to June here, too! Harry and the bunch are luckily already into May, yes? NEWTS are at the end of the month followed by another heat, correct? And two infertile heats--his dragon's being somewhat kind I would think, although, for how much longer one must wonder.

"Betrayal"... that's rather ominous...and they're still at the meeting next chapter? I was rather hoping to finally get to meet Nasta's family in more depth. I understand they're not as large as Max's extended family, and not as close as Alexander's family influence, but I caught the impression that Nasta's family was influential for more than just his wonderful father...?

Squee! What a lovely "Easter" treat for us here in the States. Thank you & Happy Spring!
~AR
schedule March 31, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the update. :) Was interesting seeing the meeting with the unmated Doms present and loving the little developments the babies are all making. Poor Richard though.
person Dc
schedule March 31, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I just had a question about this story - which I absolutely love by the way. It may have already been discussed or explained, if so I apologize for making u repeat it. I thought that all Drackens - all submissives at any rate - could only conceive during a heat period. If this is so how did Ashleigh conceive Julinda in a boat as discussed in chpt 50ish.? She was not on a heat period as it was -according to story - a family outing.
schedule March 31, 2013 at 12:00 AM
ahgggg! that tantalizing hint about the next chapter was utterly cruel! Just pure evil! Please post it soon and put me out of my misery!
person Grim1989
schedule March 31, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I hope Richard isn't going to die o: I really like him
and I wonder how Severus is doing, we haven't heard much about him.
person Caro
schedule March 31, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I love every chapter of this story, completly addicted! Everytime I see there is a new chapter up, I know I'll have a nice, relax time reading it!

Thank you!
schedule March 31, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This was a lovely chapter. Seeing the boys bonding and the changes in the babies is so adorable. I too will be happy for the school year to be over so the stress will lessened for the boys. However, I am now trembling in fear at the comments made about the next chapter. I guess I'll have to grab my tissue box, alcohol and chocolate in preparation.

~~ Meechy
schedule March 31, 2013 at 12:00 AM
person dominique1
schedule March 31, 2013 at 12:00 AM
amazing so good all the babies hitting mile stone betrayed some one is going to out them to poachers either that lady will because she wants max at least maxi was able to tell the bitch to fuck off or ashlieght will get one of the babies handed to her i just kind of hope that harry doesn't suffer a lot and i would hate to see them move from England. heat no babies yet kind of sad but happy want harry out of school brilliant chapter i can only guess because of the story about Charlotte and Tina want more but always want more
schedule March 31, 2013 at 12:00 AM
After that teasing little reveal i can't wait for the next chapter! I hope everything works out alright!