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for The Rise of the Drackens

by StarLightMassacre

person ice
schedule April 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
hi just wanted to let you know this is by far one of the best harry potter fan fiction's i have read it's original, well written, brilliant story line and i can't wait to read more.
To tell the truth i discovered this story 2 days ago and since then in my free moments have read all 70 chapters i was actually sorry when i had finished because it is just that good can't wait till the next chapter. keep going you have a dedicated fan in me.

From ice
person GuestAnon
schedule April 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I've got a few questions for you.

What if, and this is basically hypothetical, by a strange twist, a female submissive slept with a male submissive thinking that the male was going to be dominant or thinking that she was sleeping with a human, with Harry's version of circumstance of not knowing his dracken heritage, to do what that Solange girl did to get rid of her womb? Would either become barren or would it be seen as something else?

Also: say there are two or three drackens, anywhere in the world, with something similar to and/or like Harry's circumstances(Example: One of them lives in an orphanage and uses his/her magical school given orphan funds to get what they need when the need it yadda yadda, one of them is the last heir to the house but everything that was left to them was just funds because for whatever reason the house and all his/her history went down in... a blaze, an explosion, a raid when he/she was young enough to not really be interested in history and lives with a friend's family or family friend, whatever, and the last could... be living with his/her grandparent(s), alone, on the street.), in a certain proximity, one submissive and the other two dominant, and they come into their inheritance and they mate. First dominant with the submissive, and both are freaking out trying to fight their instincts but not willful and too full of fear to do so successfully, they mate and basically the same thing happens with the second one but no one else knows what's going on because well... they didn't know anything about their heritage. Not them and certainly not whoever is living with them. How would they be treated when they finally are found or they get driven away or they try, maybe succeed, maybe fail, and try to get some help finding more of them. That would be, maybe, a one in a million chance of happening but IF it did happen what do you think would... happen?

Oh! And what if a disowned squib of a dracken line made a 'muggle-born' down the line and he/she became a dracken? Or would that even happen?
schedule April 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Wow now your made intrigued! Is something going to happen to maxs mom? Is she going to betray harry? Plse give us a hint! I love the progress with the babies and harrys relationship with his mates!
person emma elizabeth pressnell
schedule April 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I love this fanfic it is the best one I have read and I have read about 600 of them. As normal it was another Brillant chapter from you, i am not looking forward to when this fanfic ends !!! What will I read?!!!!
person Suzanne
schedule April 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely LOVE this story! Please, keep up the amazing work & write some more chapters!
schedule April 1, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I am assuming the richards scar is from when they went to save her from the poachers?
person Marie
schedule April 1, 2013 at 12:00 AM
LOVE THIS! cant wait to see who betrays who - though my guess is either ashleigh or ron betraying harry . can't wait for the update
person tkykitty
schedule April 1, 2013 at 12:00 AM
WOW Great ending there. Really nerve racking! I love Myron and Richard so much that I wouldn't want anything to happen to them. The truly have accepted harry as family and family is really all that one needs (as long as their a good family and not like the Dursley's!!)
Its so wonderful to see the kids all starting to grow and grow more each chapter. Braidan is learning soooo fast. I love that Baba Ca (to say that he did understand his brother was Calix.)
Also I was just waiting to see harry find a microphone and be line "hey everyone I'm mated so back off me! And Don't even come near my mates or kids" LOL. Man some drackens can be so dense.
I'm guessing that the dracken meeting is to continue next chapter so that harry can see those little girls? Or did something happen to them? Duh, Duh, Duh! (Suspense music). Also finals are coming up which i'm sure will be nice for you as a writer. Now you can move the family from Hogwarts and all those evil studens.
Well Great Job as always! Much Praise to you.
schedule March 31, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I love Dracken meetings, can't wait till the next chapter to continue the meeting!!! :DDDD

And I wonder who will betray who, I know it won't involve one of Harry's mates betraying him, but the plot twist you mentioned has me a bit worried. Something tells me that it involves Ashleigh, but I hope she doesn't harm the children or Harry!!!! Wait! What if it's about Ashleigh tipping off the poachers about Harry and what he is!!! Oh, I hope that doesn't happen!!! But what if it's about a submissive or a dominant trying to do something to Harry or one of his kids!!! Gah, the wait is killing me and a day haven't even passed yet!!!!!!!!! DDDDDDDDDD':
schedule March 31, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 71 is fucking awesome! XD