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for The Rise of the Drackens

by StarLightMassacre

person bluekitnaru
schedule July 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
harry has an amazing control over his dracken ether that or he's far to stubborn to give up
schedule July 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Wait....wait....this is the end?? Like the END? No...noo...naw...this CAN'T be the end. Seriously. It can't be.
person alma
schedule July 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I'm sorry to hear about your little Suki. It'll be okay, just spend time with your family.
person Outlawgal
schedule July 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
what an ending. I feel sorry for Severus but its better for him in the long run.
Poor Max too.
Who your chapter is sad all the way around.
Ok I lied you did have a happy medium with Braiden standing.
Im sorry about you cat I know how you feel I had to do that same to my dog. I hope you feel better soon and take your time with the update. Losing someone or pet you love is always a hard thing to cope with.
person Tinkerbabe7
schedule July 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I loooooooooooooooooooooved this chapter just like I always love what you post :D
I'm glad they can now move on from the stressful exam week.
I feel so bad for Max. I hope his mother can finally come to her senses or his fathers make something happen. I fear this will cause more complications with Richard.
I felt so sad at the end for Severus. I hope he is reunited with Reg.

Condolences for your loss. I wish you the best in this sad time and hope that you and your will be fine eventually. I bet your cat was very awesome :)


P.S. The only thing that confused me was this sentence, "He knew this was his ending, he had nothing left tying him to this world except a grown godson in Blaise and a self-taken on ward in Potter, who was also grown." I believe you meant Draco as his godson. Just thought you'd like to know.
person lola
schedule July 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
poor Sev :(
schedule July 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
No!! He can't be dead!! Please tell me that Severus didn't die!! *sniffles* I hope he just went to sleep, that he didn't die!! *sniffles*

And, Braiden is standing~! I wonder when he will start to walk~!! :DD

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*sniffles* I really hope Severus is still alive and just went into a deep sleep that didn't allow nightmares to get through~!! :'DD
schedule July 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I'm so happy the boys are done with there exams and can now enjoy life in a more regular environment. Poor Max having to go through wi his threats in even a "fake" manner has devastated everyone but we can only be hopeful their plan will work. I cried when Severus died because I kept hoping that something would spark an interest in him again but he has lived for so long without his mate and only painful questions in his heart. Now that his questions are answered his heart has emptied as well as his soul. May he find peace in his next grand adventure.

I'm sorry you lost someone precious to you. Our animals can often feel like our children especially when they've been a part of your life for so long. I thank you for taking the time to post and hope you take time for yourself to grief and find comfort where you can!

~~ Meechy
person Panda
schedule July 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This was a very awesome chapter. Poor Max.

Sorry to hear about Suki... RIP Suki *HUG*
person qwerty
schedule July 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This was such a sad chapter, between Max and Severus :( I was hoping things would turn around for Severus but alas.

I'm very sorry to hear about your cat.