rate_review Reviews

So sorry about your cat. It's terrible losing those little family members.

Honesty can't believe the fuss over Ashleigh forgetting for one moment about Harry's abusive childhood. It's making Harry seem spoiled, like "How dare you forget about my abusive past even for a second!!!" I adore Harry too, but honestly....

What a wonderful, engaging story. It's so beautifully detailed, and your character development is excellent. I love the little moments of domesticity, and it's obvious to me you know a lot about babies and their behavior. I have to say I'm frequently on edge for something bad to happen, especially with the little comments about poachers. I read "Betrayal" with knots in my stomach because of your warning and was so relieved nothing too terrible happened to these lovely characters. I'm sure you won't answer, but will the vile poachers ever make an appearance?

Please don't be offended, but I honestly don't understand Max's rage at Ashleigh however. Maybe it's a dracken thing, but I just don't see how her one comment warrants such a sensitive reaction.

You're amazing at character development and I'm loving this so much. Looking forward to the next chapter. :)

Just thought I'd let you know I lobe your stories! Also I'm sorry about your cat, I hope she's in a better place.

If Kimberly's ninety years old, and Drackens can get pregnant until they're about a hundred and fifty, then why isn't she still having babies?

I am so sorry to hear about your beloved family member passing (and by this I do mean your kitty, Suki.) I too have 2 older cats (Joy and Grace, sisters) and have lost three in my life time (Tony, Missy and Frankie). Nothing replaces their love they have given us. I will say that I do see and sometimes feel their presence so I don't feel as though they are truly gone. My Condolences and best wishes for your recovery.
With much respect to you,
tkykitty

I feel for your loss. I always hate it when we have to put down one of our animals or if they simply pass on.

On to the review!
I hope with all my heart that this makes Ashleigh change & seek help.
I kept thinking in my head "Severus is not going to die. Severus is not going to die." And then he did. And I just spent the last eight or so minutes bawling like I haven't since Sirius died in OotP (book one. It was very moving), and then when Dobby died in DH part one (movie. The expressions were just so heart wrenching!) It just gave me so many feels.

Yet I cannot wait to see how Harry & Blaise react.

Hey just got done reading the story. I love it. I'm sorry for your loss. I know what it's life to lose a beloved pet.

It's taken me almost 2 weeks to read from the very first chapter to chapt.76 and I enjoyed every bit of it. I love the way you write, I love the details and the thought that you've put into it. I found myself stunned a few times by the responses you sometimes gave reviewers; usually I found myself thinking, dudes were these people actually reading the story cause it's all in there already lol.
You've written an excellent story, your characters are believable, I love the OC's. I have to say one of my favorite things however is the realism with the pregnancies and child rearing, I can't begin to count the amount of poorly written pregnancy (especially Mpregs) fics that are out there. Since I've had several children it's something I know a lot about lol. I don't know if it's because you've had kids yourself or you are just really knowledgeable about the subject but either way, thank you.
Honestly I could gush over this fic for a while but I'll leave by saying, I was impressed with every single chapter you've written thus far and I look forward to seeing what comes next. Also, write at your own pace, I can't believe the nerve of some people who actually complain to you about this.
Lastly, my condolences for your cat, loosing a pet is like loosing family. I'm very sorry for your loss.

There is nothing wrong with mourning a beloved pet. Last year I lost 2 cats and 1 dog. The cats were both 15 years old and the dog was 14 witch is very old for a pommy. We had them for more then half my life, I was elven when we got the two cats.

I love this story I found it right after you posted Harry's birthday right before braiden's birth. I just about had a panic attack when it was taken down from ff.net then it was put back. I switched to aff for the unedited sexy fun lol. I wait as patiently as I can for more of your great stories.

My suggestion take one of your stories and give harry a new kitty just like suki (I think I spelled that right,sorry if I didn't) it might cheer you up to write about her and some of her funniest moments. Hope you feel better


Wishing you the best
Jennifer D.

my condolences on the loss of your treasured companion