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i re raed and i realize that I want Ashleigh better for her family and grandchildren richard and myron need her as well as her kids. apart of me wants her to die because as aparent you do anything for your kids even if you lose a kid i have a niece that has three children her oldest son is health 15 year old her daughter who has chromosomal abnormality (Ring 9 Chromosome) that makes her unable to walk talk much or care for herself.she has has a mind of a 6 year old but she so far has made it to 14 years old the doctor told her mother that it not safe for her to have another baby she got pregnant with twins one died in the womb she had to carry it and had a health baby girl who is 5 months old doctor's told her no more babies and she is now four month pregnant again this time with a boy the same thing happen she was supposed to have twins but one of the babies died again and is still in side of her we told her she needs to stop and get help because she is trying to get back the babies she lost she will not listen we just pray that we don't lose her this time i know that this has nothing to do with anything but it made me realize that ashliegh need to be present for her kids and mates and grand kids helll i want her more than remus because there's reason for why she acting like this but i also hope that either she decided to live and get help or let her go like severus i was woundering will you do a scale bits about severus funeral he was blaise godfather after all and why wasn't nas dad with them at the faerie court sorry had to go to grandpa funeral to day and your stories always help

Why would you do this to me?...How could you just leave us on a cliffhanger like that. *falls to my knees and shakes fists* WHY STAR WHY?! I loved this chapter so much and I can't wait to see Harry and Nasta put those prissy faeries in their place.

Yeah!! So great to see a new chapter, I really love this story so much.

Of course, you had to be evil and stop just before the meeting. Like we already wouldn't be panting for the next chapter. lol

The death of Snape still twists my heart everytime I read it, very well written.

Oh my goodness Star! I don't even know where to begin! This chapter was seriously amazing (as all of them are). I loved the little peak you gave us of Nasta's feral side, are we going to get to see more of that in the future? Also, please don't tell me that Fairies aren't going to try and take little Leo away! I simply couldn't bear it! Absolutely cannot wait for Harry to conceive his next clutch and to see more of Nasta ( So many multiple meanings of that)

Love the story, well both stories, but glad for an update here. So what are the faeries going to do to tick Harry off? and how will Harry put them in there place?

so very good but why isn't Aneirin with them i so hope everything goes good i was looking forward to the court but it was cut short still amazing and lucius getting handed his ass but also protecting harry brilliant want more always

I hated how Harry and Nasta were harping on how Draco should change, I was quite happy with the fic and then I saw that. Just because Draco likes his teacup in a saucer and crossing his hands on his lap while waiting for dinner, he shouldn't have to change himself totally to suit their expectations. It's like asking him to change so they can like him more. Like what the hell? You should accept your lover for all his quirks, yes he's prissy but he should only have to tone it down but to expect him to change his whole self totally just because you don't like it, makes it seem you didn't love him from the start at all.

He was brought up that way but just because they hate it, doesn't mean he has to hiss about how horses and carts reminds him of Draco like it was a disease they have to take it away from him. That's his upbringing. So what? As long as he has good traits like Max who can cook? It's ok but teacup in saucer and crossing his hands in his laps for dinner and everybody should raise the red flag because the apocalypse is coming.

Yes, Draco should accommodate on stuff, like his girls running and playing in mud and he shouldn't force others to do things his 'prissy' way but at the same time the others should allow him to be himself and not talk about him behind his back like that and so hatefully too. I mean Harry doing it hatefully not Nasta. What kind of horrible lover, is he?

I mean come on. Just like Harry, he isn't as submissive or as obedient as other subs. But his lovers accepted it because this is HARRY and they didn't want to change him but when it comes to Draco they do? Isn't that like double standard? Harry obviously can do NO wrong in this fic and I accept the fact that most people are biased to him but seriously?

Draco wants his girls to be little princesses but Harry wants them to be able to play and not worry. Instead of discussing it properly, Harry was like NO then end of story. Though I agree with him, he should have done it in a better way. But it's like Harry gets all the final say in here and as long as somebody is different, they must be wrong. There should be times where they should act like a little lady and gentleman and times where they should be running amuck and making a mess of things. And if Draco wants to teach them a little etiquette, he should be allowed too as long as he doesn't do it too demandingly. So if their sons and daughter seeing from example that he uses saucers and crosses his hands on his lap and does the same. Will they hate them? Or get angry at Draco for setting a 'bad' example. Things should change but little things like that, he shouldn't have too and it's horrible that they EXPECT him to.

This part especially really rubs me the wrong way.

Hey there,

I love this story. I cant wait to see what's going to happen when Harry meets the faries. I also wonder if Max's mother will finaly see a healer. Cant wait for the next chapter!!!!! I love your work.

i have just re-read this story and i love it as much the second time around. its a wonderful story . well thought out and clearly a great deal off planning has gone into the story line and its plot points. I see you mention struggel a bit with the senescence, i know they aren't easy to write but i think you are doing a fine jobb. they are well written and ... if i can say it very hot!

Look forward to reading more! ;)