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for The Rise of the Drackens

by StarLightMassacre

schedule October 14, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Absolutely love this story, it is very well written, and I hope you update soon. I am sorry to hear your kitty is so ill. I hope he has no pain as he goes, and I am sorry you will lose him. I have lost several kitties to cancer and kidney failure, it is a terrible thing to go through. Regards, Dorian

schedule September 30, 2017 at 12:00 AM

This might be a weird question, but do female Dracken submissives give birth by cutting their stomachs open? Or the natural way? I was wondering how that would work especially in the case of multiple births

person Jan
schedule August 20, 2017 at 12:00 AM

It's a boy! Yay! I'm hoping Draco's the biological father since he's the only one that doesn't have a mini him running around, hope to see cheater 115 soon.

I am so sorry to hear about your baby boy, 6 is to young, I hope he's as pain free as possible, cause I know how hard it is to see your beloved cat hurting and not being able to do anything, but if meds takes away any discomforts, that's a blessing for him and you. 😢

schedule August 18, 2017 at 12:00 AM

My condolences on your sick cat. I know it is not easy to deal with. I hope it works out but if not know that there are people thinking of you both. 

Another wonderful chapter! So much was covered! I feel like it's gaining momentum for some new developments. Can't wait. 

 

person Magsie
schedule August 12, 2017 at 12:00 AM

To be completely honest, I first started reading this story back when you first started it... but I didn’t like Harry’s characterization.  He seemed too dependent and clingy at first for me.  So, I gave up and stopped reading this just about the time Draco joined in as Harry’s mate (before Maxie). 

However, I have read some of your other work.  I loved Blue Moon and my current love, which I wait for an update on, is The Beguile and Devotion of a Black Heir.  As I wait for an update to Black Heir, I noticed you updating Rise of the Drackens and decided to give it another chance, maybe I just didn’t read enough or was in the wrong mind set when I first read it.

So, over the last week and half... I read all of it.  That is a lot gay orgies in a short span of time!

And, my first attempt at reading it was wrong.  The stuff with Harry that I wasn’t fond of was more of him being territorial of his mates and him learning to deal with his Dracken side.

I really love how you’ve grown Harry as a character, he is still a lot like Harry, but different.  His mates, babies and Dracken have changed him, but not in a way that doesn’t make sense in the world you’ve built.

I love the dynamic between him and his mates, and the dynamic between each mate.  They have issues and problems, nothing is magically perfect, but they all are in it and willing to work, which is how a real relationship should be! 

Babies.  I love them.  I have special place in my heart for tiny Leolin and tubby Farren.  You scared me several times with Leolin!  If something does happen to him, just know I may morph into a Dracken and hunt you down! 

It takes a bit to get used to your writing style.  You don’t have an overarching plot, as most books/fanfictions have; you have a set up for the character but no major plot that needs addressing ASAP.  You have smaller plots within just a telling of their lives.  Not that anything is wrong with it, just that it threw me a reader at first and I had to adapt.  You repeat things a bit, you do it a lot in Black Heir, but it happens sometimes in Drackens as well.  Mainly, inner dialogue and exposition.  It can be a bit redundant and pulls the reader out at times, which takes away from your world and the characters.    

I am very interested to see where you go and what happens with the Fairies!  I hope the new baby is Draco’s!  And, I am interested to see how you continue to develop the characters and their relationships with each other.  Oh, and I hope Warren gets with Eitri, like he obviously wants to!            

Lots of Love,

Magsie

schedule August 10, 2017 at 12:00 AM

I absolutely love the storyline and characters. I have read it every chance I got. I was even late to work a time or two because I just could not put it away.  I have gotten upset with other reviewers getting angry about the slow updates. Do what you need to and we will wait. Well maybe. Lol I love this story.

schedule August 8, 2017 at 12:00 AM

I am in love with this story and hope that you write more! I haven't been able to stop reading once I started.

schedule July 31, 2017 at 12:00 AM

I have finally reread and caught up with this story I really enjoyed it.

person Jan
schedule July 15, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Wow! I have to say, I want a birthday like that! It would definitely be so much fun😃 

Harry and the boys did good by Max, they definitely went all out for him. I can't wait to see what's going to happen in chapter 114! So excited!

schedule July 14, 2017 at 12:00 AM

With how needy Harry was for sex, is Thunderer's fluid craving semen?