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I love your story. it almost seems to be apart of the Harry Potter series. It is so good I can imagine myself apart of the story. i love your story and I hope you update soon.

I just want to say that this is one of the best fan-fictions I have ever read. And I love, love love this story. Go Drackens!!!!<3

I kept coming back to this story over the past year to catch up. I like the way you took the HP-verse and pretty much flipped it on it's arse and made it your own. I love the concept, love the characters, and I enjoy what you're doing to it. Normally I don't read WIPs, but I'm glad I decided to read this one. Keep them coming!
Red

I absolutely love this story... it's one of the best fiction pieces related to the Potter Verse... Ever :) At first I was a little unsure about the whole 'creature' thing as I've never read one I liked, but I could tell how much thought and work you put into this lovely piece. I didn't like the submissive/ dominant thing either, but it's grown on me... plus, the doms in Harry's life are awesome!

I did like that Harry chose some older doms... it's nice to think that not everyone thinks you have to be in a relationship with someone only a year or two younger or older than you to be 'appropriate'. I really like that Harry is so strong... and yet so gentle with everyone... he's like the perfect man- haha. I love all the babies in this story and how you integrate them... most people just mention them a few times or just leave them out once they were born... you put thought into each individual child and they all have their own quirks and likes and dislikes and their all feeding differently... they smile at different times... I love it!

Well, I can't wait until the next update, as I've been checking back for a week to see if there was anything new and almost squealed when I saw there was! But, I'm much to lady like to make such a noise- haha. Take care!

Gah! This chapter was amazing! (never expected anything less). How you come up with half of this stuff is beyond me. Is Harry really pregnant already? When did he have the heat? Is it really true? Please say yes

Eitri would be perfect for leolin as a mate if leo becomes a Valkyrie any way kind of would like harry to become friends with Lathen and Ezrah would also like to see ezrah have a baby to. and the five faeries that were nice to them. i kind of feel bad for Alston his daughter should let him see his grand babies. it would be nice if leolin has another sibling that faerie down the line once leolin is older would also love to see nasta lose it on someone anyway love it brilliant like always love how harry told her off

i love every chapter of this story, always have. i would LOVE to see another story about them, as in part three, but i do understand about real life and how other people can just short circuit the will to write any more. *hugs you and hands you scones*

Poor Nasta, at first I was in total agreement with Harry about not taking Leolin to the Faerie Courts but now I understand more over what could happen from Nasta's thoughts. He has some tough decisions to make. Oh and about the Dursley's going to court, if its anything like the court system here in Canada, it would take 5 years if the case doesn't get thrown out due to too many court cases.

Cool update!! Look forward to the next update.

Omg Awww thank you for the birthday wish!!!!!!!!!!!! It really means a lot!!!!!! *\(^o^)/* and I love the new chapter! It was great as always! I especially loved the look inside Nasta's top dominant mindset. It just adds even more depth into your characters. ;) anyway, thank you again for the birthday wish and update! I eagerly await your next one. （≧∇≦）

-Emma