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Hi! Just wanted to let you know that I've read this story a number of times now and I LOVE IT!! So kudos to you and your perseverance :) And your planning, all the babies are absolutely darling and I just wanna cwtch them! With permission of course ;)

HS

I wanted to ask a question about the heat periods. I'm to chapter - actually I can't remember the chapter number but it was called a "secrete society" . I should probably finish this before asking but I have THE WORST memory and I know I'll forget. So please forgive me if you do answer this later in the story - which I absolutely love - but back on track. The question I had was I thought only submissives went on heat so why did Marianna go on heat as she is dominate Dracken? I also want to say I love some of the names in this story - I like unusual and there are plenty! Thank you for taking the time to write this story not to mention the reviews you have to read through (& answer) - it takes dedication. Thanks again.

Hello! So I was rereading ROTD AGAIN when I found myself upset Not with the story! I love the story! But with the fact that it is just a story and that I couldn't invite them all over for dinner or to offer to babysit for a few hours, or something like that. When I told my sister that I was upset that I'd never be able to meet these people she looked at me like I'd lost my mind. She just doesn't understand, so I just thought I'd share with someone who might know how I was feeling.

Thank you for all the time and heart you put into this I really appreciate it. <3

well I personally dislike this twist - because I think Draco / Blaise would have been enough. And if you had to ad another on in the mix it should have been one that we already know. Although I think the warnings should contain violence and gore - what they did to Dominic mad me almost throw up. I read further but I am reluctant to be honest.

I have got to commend you. This story is fantastically well written, has enough adult content to be real without over the top pure smut (nothing wrong with that but you know I like plot), and just great. I will be reading this and maybe grow up some courage to start some of my own HP fantfics. This, honestly, is brilliant.

WOW! That was amazing. So much info about fairies in that chapter. My head was spinning so I can only imagine how poor harry feels! Max is such a great guy, holding down the fort while Nasta was gone. And Nasta has sooooo much to think and worry about as top Dracken. I never knew. I just want to give him a big hug. I often wonder what it must be like to be a character in this story. The world you created is so realistic that I just want to pop in there and find out for myself.
Also I wanted to send you some kitty hugs (I just had to put down my cat Joy who was fighting stomach cancer. I know you lost your kitty not long ago and I'm so glad to see you back to writing again.)
Can't wait till the next wonderful chapter.

Oh please! Stop with the bs. That's normal? The fact that harry said it in a VICIOUS manner is what got to me. Like it was some kind of sickness Draco had to get rid off. Did you even get what I was trying to say or the moment I offended your precious Harry everything in your head stopped.(Yes, this fic is sickeningly biased to Harry, it's like he can do no wrong.) Nervousness or not(the fact that he would say something about someone he loves over nerves, only makes it worse), it's the EXTENT of what he said that got to me. Yes, everybody has something they may want to rant about their lover, but the way he said it made me sick. If that's venting a 'little', I'm afraid what happens when gets really angry. Ranting to someone was only HALF of what got me angry. It's the fact that Harry actually said that Draco should change as though if he didn't he would always be ANGRY with Draco. He has accepted Max neurotic ways but he actually WANTS Draco to change himself? The fact that Draco has already changed as much as he could is not enough(told by Nasta himself) and he expects more? What does that actually say about Harry's love for him? That he would actually prefer Draco to be the way he wants instead of loving him for his decidedly annoying quirks?

I hope that CM and the author has some more things to say to each other. So please continue, I already has some popcorn.

I'll keep this fairly simple

Loved the chapter. Very much enjoyed seeing the interaction with other supernatural creatures, and that they have failings too. It was fun seeing the further interactions between the mates and how Drackens are prepared for the future. It's always fun to learn more about their culture. I'm so glad that you continue to work on this fic, I know if takes a lot of time and effort and I'd just like to say how much I appreciate it. I always eagerly await the next instalment and when you do decide to finish, I will probably go back and read the story entirely, loving every word.

No matter what, keep writing professionally or online, because you are amazing!