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I can only think that it would be harry blaise and draco in their quidttich gear but so brilliant love that the babies or starting be more active tegan is so boss and the boys just her little minions the more they learn the cuter it is i so hope that sean comes back to his mate looking forward to more

it was just Brilliant.

I began reading this story when i was pregnant with my Daughter. And now i can relate even more to Harry about wanting to slow time down, enjoy my baby being a baby. She's 4 months now and growing fast, she's started babbling and everything and my heart clenches every time. I still love this story and I really can't wait for more. At least now i understand how poor Harry feels though i can barely deal with my one husband and he has four mates to look after him lol.

absolutely loved the last few chapters which I had not read previously.

Please keep writing and don't let life get you down. You have a wonderful story going and I look forward to reading it in it's entirety whenever I get the chance.

Keep writing as life allows.....

First of all, let me start by saying I truly enjoy your work. I have yet to read the last chapter, but I finally figured out what bothered me about the last one, and I believe this is a recurring thing in your writing style. What follows is some unsolicited advice, which I think could improve the story if taken to heart, but which you'd have every right to ignore as well: after all I'm just a random internet stranger who couldn't come close to writing something as enjoyable as Rise of the Drackens. ;)

In the previous chapter, 'Audience', it felt to me like you focussed on developing Nasta's character in one particular way: pointing out how hard it is for him to be the top dominant. While this is important, especially in the case of original characters, it shouldn't feel too forced. In contrast to Max's development, which was much more fluent, it seemed like Nasta's personality and responsibility were being stressed too much.

"Honestly, I don

Loved this chapter, even if it was a short one. I was waiting for Uncle Nico to pop up again. I was wondering if you were ever going to have Blaise's paternal family pop in or are they going to remain stubborn and ignore him as usual?

I loved Harry's heat period and they way Max distracted them all as they waited for it to start. Harry's still stressing over the visit to the faerie city but hopefully they'll get a good handle on Leo's routine. I did notice that Draco was the first to Harry during his heat period so let's hope that gives him a better chance for one of his own this time! Can't wait for the next chapter!

~~ Meechy

Thanks for the update. A lovely treat to find at the end of a work day. ^__^

Wonderful chapter, as always. Alexander should be a riot if Harry has one of Draco's babies as he did "get in there first."

Starlight, I just can't understand why readers can not read your creation for what it is. A wonderful story about Harry and his mates. I look forward to each and every chapter and read it over a couple of times because I know I miss things. But for someone to just sit and pick on your creation is wrong. You are right in telling them to go find another story to read. But I don't think that will satisfy them and they will just complain about that author. Keep up the great writing and I always look forward to anything you write, and I am in the process of reading all of your stories. Look forward to the next chapter. :))))