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for The Rise of the Drackens

by StarLightMassacre

person ShikaBear
schedule December 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Another wonderful chapter. I have had a kid roll off the bed and hit his head on concrete before, so I could totally empathize with the terror of seeing a kid in a precarious position and worrying if they will be okay. Poor Harry, he is having nightmares, the minds way of working through your worries. Hope he totally works through them soon.

I always love seeing the family get together, it's so great to see Harry with a big supportive loving family. But did they not invite Remus because of the whole getting married/having a baby thing and Harry not wanting to get into an emotional confrontation with him? Or did Remus not show up?

I loved the slave scene. It was wonderful. I really want Nasta, Max, Blaise and Draco, please, can I borrow them on the weekends?
person Nicola
schedule December 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I LOVED this chapter. Can not wait until the next!!! Thank you so much Star!!!
person dime
schedule December 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Alright, can I just say I envy Harry his four gorgeous slaves? XD Great fun!
Leolin's copying is adorable. ^^
- Dime
schedule December 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Lovely for Harry's birthday. I love the showing of how it shocks Harry, but he loves it once he gets into it. Realistic!
person BriBB
schedule December 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Thank you so much for the explanation, looking forward to the chapters to come.
person Bamarose
schedule December 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Loved it! Regean falling down the stairs though I was sorta prepared for it cause of the sneek peek on facebook still gave me a heart attack. The party was awesome I like it when Harry bonds with other submissives its cute
The guys gift to Harry was hot and totally awesome but I think my fav part was with Leolin copying Harry that was adorable!
person momoko
schedule December 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I like this chapter, I like the fantasy at the end very much.
thank you for writing such a wonderful story.
person Meechypoo64
schedule December 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Loved this chapter! When the boys said they had a birthday surprise for Harry and the title of the chapter is fantasy, I was just hoping it was the sex slave fantasy that they talked about in a previous chapter! It was everything and more that we've come to expect from these sexy Dracken! I loved the gag gift that Richard snuck in and I can just imagine Harry's embarrassed reaction. On the topic of everyone's reaction to Regan falling down the stairs, I can sympathize. When my son was a little over one and toddling we had a similar incident with him. We came home from shopping and he was playing in the living room of our townhouse while my husband and I brought the groceries in. Little did I know that the basement door was cracked open and not locked like normal. I came in with the next batch and noticed the door wide open and heard a thudding noise. I ran to the door and looked through the doorway to see my son falling down the stairs. Fortunately he only had a small scrape and bruise from brushing the concrete wall on the way down and other than being scared and a little shocked he was perfectly fine. Accidents happen with our kids no matter how cautious and you can only hope they are seriously injured! Harry's reactions were still perfectly normal for any parent!

~~ Meechy
person slmncpm
schedule December 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
awww i love that leolin was copying him, such a sweet babie, of course i love all of them. the slave play was magnificent, i want a robe like that!
person AR
schedule December 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
A fabulous read, as always--and what a lovely treat to find after a rather crappy workday, so thanks!

Too cute with Leolin mimicking Harry, and Calix saying his first word--won't Harry be a bit peeved he missed that when they finally show him the video? I'm in terrified awe that any baby would have the perseverance and determination to crawl up an entire flight of stairs... sickening. And let's just say "master" = HOTHOTHOT and leave it at that! ^__^

I'll be eagerly looking forward to your next update!