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for The Rise of the Drackens

by StarLightMassacre

person ChrisVags
schedule December 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Love the story and as always can't wait for the next chapter. Just a quick question. I was re-reading a bit and was at the part where they talked about languages an speaking to snakes. Draco had raised the question if any of the kids will be able to speak it. Are they ever going to touch on it?
person Nicola
schedule December 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
LOVED IT!!!! Such a cute chapter, and i loved brandens first tantrum and leolins first word. :D
person mimesis
schedule December 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
En verdad amo tu historia todos los d
person Lica Schmidt
schedule December 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I can't belive that Braiden is one year old, he is so adorable even when he is in a tantrum... You are a mean writer, such peaceful chapter and then... The promise of suffer and tears... O my god! But I am waiting for the 83th eather way, hehehehehe. Kisses
person Meechypoo
schedule December 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
A lovely and fun filled birthday party. Of course it wouldn't be a party with some form of angst even if it was a mini tantrum thrown by the birthday boy! I have tons of stories from my mother-in-law about my husband as a kid and how he spent hours playing with the boxes his presents came in while ignoring the actual presents! Still wondering what's up with Remus and I feel sorry for Harry. I'm just happy he's got his mates to comfort him.

~~ Meechy
schedule December 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Loved it i know how Harry feels, my baby girl is only 5 months old and im already dreading her first birthday. Time goes way to fast for a mother, it just slips through the fingers like sand. I know that when you write about the funeral I'm gonna cry, no death in that book was sadder than Severus's and your version of his death just got me right in the heart. Can't wait to see more about a newly pregnant Harry too, I wanna know whos got babies now lol
person BAFan
schedule December 7, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 81

So happy to see a new chapter, and what a chapter it is. As usual, lots of stuff happening. My heart almost stopped when Regan went missing, though it also went out to poor Draco. It didn't take him long to realize the baby wasn't there, and they all need to accept the reality that enclosed space is a must when there are mobile babies around. Especially that many babies, lol.

"'How are you Regan?' Harry asked him happily. 'Are you enjoying yourself? I bet you are. I bet you
person daithi
schedule December 7, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Not sure how I missed this story but am glad I found it. I love Harry/Draco pairings but I have also always had a soft spot for Blaise as well, so having all three in one story is perfect. Am looking forward to seeing how this all works out.
person Jannette
schedule December 6, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I almost died from all the baby cuteness! They are growing so fast! Is it normal for wizards to be able to do magic so young? Or is it because he was scared and Ragan is part Draken? I can't wait for more babies :3 I absolutely loved this chapter although I am wondering if they know that Snape died? I believe it's been more that a month since that happend. But anyways brilliant as always ^_^
person tkykitty
schedule December 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I don't think I reviewed the last chapter before this new one so I first want to say how amazing that one was!!! It's always interesting to see how you will write harry's heat each time. This time is was "wham" just like that and it started. lol. poor harry will never get but a few moments warning then it starts.
As for this chapter: OMG Leolin was totally the star!!! The cutest little Fairy baby ever! I can't believe he has such a big new development, coping harry's facial movements. That's a huge step! Also I loved that harry had a great birthday and a wonderful birthday present from his mates. Awwwweeee. So cute!
As Always I cant wait for the next chapter :-)