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December 21, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Omg Omg, let me just say that I love love loooove this story, I found it about a week back and that's all I've been reading, I'm in South Africa and I just went on holiday so I had a lot if time on my hands. This story is great and the way that you develop the characters is marvellous. Can't wait to see what happens next!!! PS: Sorry to here about your cat, I have a cat also and I understand the kind of emotional attachment, I hope you are well and Happy Holidays!!
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December 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Stupid question (maybe)...
You indicated in chapter 76 that Serverus was dying (or even dead). But now you've never addressed that. Surely Draco's parents would have at least told him and Harry that their teacher, mentor and fellow Draiken had died from grief over his lost mate? When are you going to get around to that?
You indicated in chapter 76 that Serverus was dying (or even dead). But now you've never addressed that. Surely Draco's parents would have at least told him and Harry that their teacher, mentor and fellow Draiken had died from grief over his lost mate? When are you going to get around to that?
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December 16, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This Is a fabulous story I would love to read more when you post next. I love the development of your characters borrowed and original.
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December 13, 2013 at 12:00 AM
love this story, braiden had his first birthday, every body is growing. craving for more
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December 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
i love your story so afar it keeps getting better and better and i hope the baby will be draco's. and have harry been told that sevrus has died?
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December 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Re-read the entire thing staring last week - I forget how much I love this until another chapter is posted. I don't have any real criticism (most of it is just a word missing here or there). The flow of the story is great. The character development is fantastic. My only question is you mentioned Severus's funeral. Ummm what the heck? When did Snape die? I was kinda blindsided by that.
But really awesome fic. Can't wait for the next chapter!!
But really awesome fic. Can't wait for the next chapter!!
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December 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I'm depressed now I love Severus so very much and I know he had to die but it still hurts so much to see him gone. I love your story so much and I hope you feel happy again so
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December 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Loved it! I can't believe Leolin said his first word squeee!!!
Braiden's birthday was sweet and I thought his "tantrum" was hilarious
I was wondering if you gonna have anymore individual dates anytime soon? I don't think Nasta or Blaise have had much alone time lately with Harry. Loving how its going though so no complaints from me just anticipation for whatever is next :)
Braiden's birthday was sweet and I thought his "tantrum" was hilarious
I was wondering if you gonna have anymore individual dates anytime soon? I don't think Nasta or Blaise have had much alone time lately with Harry. Loving how its going though so no complaints from me just anticipation for whatever is next :)
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December 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I really loved this chapter, its exiting how much Leolin is developing.
One can really tell how much he is attached to harry, as he is mirroring
him. I just realised how much i spoil my baby boy (9 months) when
i read this chapter, he is also a furniture cruiser :)
Thank you for a great chapter.
One can really tell how much he is attached to harry, as he is mirroring
him. I just realised how much i spoil my baby boy (9 months) when
i read this chapter, he is also a furniture cruiser :)
Thank you for a great chapter.
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December 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Hello - Love RfoD. When I saw you had updated i just had start reading form the start to refresh my memory. Still love it. Sorry I have not reviewed before I just get tried of saying "love your story, wish you would finish it at some point to" or not finishing the story 'cause it is so badly written I can't stand it. BUt that is not your story so I will get back on track.
Love your OMC's especially Max and Nasta. I like your story development and How you have brought Amela (nora's mum) more into the story and got her talking to Harry rather than attacking him and his babies. Aggressive Harry getting himself some action is so cute. I just can't get enough of this story and of course scalely bits.
Just something to note. Never put Red wine on ice! White wine sure, Champagne yes but not the red. It should be served room temp. Opened to breathe and for better taste decanted as well.
Keep letting this thought bunnies out to play.
"Razur
Love your OMC's especially Max and Nasta. I like your story development and How you have brought Amela (nora's mum) more into the story and got her talking to Harry rather than attacking him and his babies. Aggressive Harry getting himself some action is so cute. I just can't get enough of this story and of course scalely bits.
Just something to note. Never put Red wine on ice! White wine sure, Champagne yes but not the red. It should be served room temp. Opened to breathe and for better taste decanted as well.
Keep letting this thought bunnies out to play.
"Razur