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for The Rise of the Drackens

by StarLightMassacre

person magentah
schedule December 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh I'm nervous! I'm so afraid Leolin won't make it. Then, in considering possible plot twists coupled with the chapter title, I started to worry that it would mean Leolin pulls through, but perhaps has to go off and spend time surrounded by more faeries (goodbye to his family), or that Max is outed (goodbye, darling mate Max), or that Harry perhaps goes and spends some intensive time with the mind healer (temporarily goodbye to his children and mates). Eek! This chapter sure was a heart wrenching, but I have to remind myself that it merely shows your skill as a writer to have your words pull at my heart like that. :) Thank you as always for writing this wonderful story, for sticking with it, and for updating! Looking forward (despite my fears) to the next chapter!
person What's in a name
schedule December 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Please please please don't kill Leonin. That would just be cruel and I just can't
person Anon
schedule December 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Please let leolin live please please please don't let him die!
person mimesis
schedule December 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Please do not kill Leolin !!!!! please is so sad :(
person Frosty
schedule December 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This is really really sad. I can't stop crying. I really hope you have Leolin recover from this but from the statement you made in your last A/N, I doubt that will happen. Just thinking about this is making me tear up again.
person Anon
schedule December 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Usually I look forward to another chapter but now I'm not looking forward to finding out what happens next. This chapter was a little too emotional for me.
person Mama-purr
schedule December 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
OMG please no don't let him die please please please let Harry's magic to out of control and bring him back again please!!!!
person lollotjoff
schedule December 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
please please don
person richon
schedule December 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
love this story, I am so sad at the moment, poor harry, poor leolin, Mak was a jerk. craving for more, harry will do something to help his son. see you soon
person Bamarose
schedule December 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
A cliffy seriously? Poor Leolin the goodbyes made me cry ;( I hope you update soon cause I so hate being left hanging like this as to whether Leolin lives or not and I hope he does cause if he don't I will squall like a baby lol