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I cried so much during this chapter its lovely and heart wrenching please update soon. Also I was wondering if you could give a description of what Harry's mates look like at the end of the next chapter because I recently read Rise of the Drackens: Scaled Bits and in it you said Nasta was pale and I always pictured him with more of a bronze skin tone. Thanks for making this story .

please please don't kill Leolin! I am begging you! ( gets down on knees with puppy dog eyes ). O.O

First of all I love this fanfic. I have read this about four different times. Please don't kill
Leolin off. He is my favorite child. To me he seems to so far be like Harry in doing the unlikely,the impossible.

PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE KEEP LEOLIN ALIVE!!!!!!!!! I love Leolin so much and it honestly just breaks my heart that Harry is be put through this. I know that it would make more sense for Leolin to die because of not having an immune system but, can't like some of the Draken blood he has help him survive, like a miracle type thing.

I know at the end of the day it's your decision because it's your story and I will keep reading even if Leolin does die but, can you at least think about it? Can't you....this sounds so cruel...have Cepheus die instead? Like Harry's poison did not completely leave his system and does a sneak attack. Or have Harry finally meet Remus and he says goodbye to him. Or something else, just don't take Leolin away, please. I am begging you to consider in keeping him.

I didn't mean ramble, I just really love Leolin and always want to keep Harry happy. However, it doesn't change how I feel about this story.
P.S. If you have time to respond, please write to me on FanFiction.net my username is VampirePrincess248.

NO!!!!!!!!!!!! Leolin can't die!! He's a fighter and so is Harry!!

Please not precious Leolin, Harry has enough on his plate without dealing with Leolin's death too. This might be enough to send Harry into depression and lose the twins. I had to pause several times reading the ending to that chapter to wipe my eyes. At first I thought the some Fairies had stole Leolin. Though I am surprised and glad Harry didn't rip into that nurse. I know I would have even if it was only to focus on something other than fear. I can said I am awaiting you next chapter in morbid fascination.

Max has seemed to have a great deal of trouble hasn't he?

Please have little Leo live. That chapter broke my heart. I'll even admit to crying. I can only imagine how Harry must feel at the moment. If he doesn't not only will it destroy Harry but it will make those stuck up faries think their right in Harry's lack of ability of raising a farie child & if they were to have another farie child those faries would do everything to take the child away. I can't help but have hope since Leo is still alive in Scalded Bits even after the twins are born but it may change to fit the plot line. I am very excited for the chapter when the Dursley's go to court & justice is finally served. This is my favorite fic & I look forward to each update.

I just read this chapter a second time since the first time I read it I had actually stopped at a rest stop on the turnpike while driving to my grandparents' house so I felt I didn't really absorb it as well as I should have. I don't think I've ever reviewed, but I thought I should at least once; you are an amazing story teller, you make it so easy to connect with your stories and characters, and that's a talent that, unfortunately, many writers don't have. In fact, I have connected to this story so much that I'm going to be in turmoil until I find out how everything resolves. I was even at my uncle's yesterday visiting for the first time in about two years and met my cousin's, now year old, baby who was sick and caught myself thinking of little Leolin and Calix. Also, it was the light of my day when your updates gave me a reason to procrastinate my school work and studying, and I give you extra praise for that one update during my finals week, because who wants to study for organic chemistry when you can read and awesome story? Anyways, sorry for the crazy, long winded, not really a review that probably has spelling and grammatical errors from typing this on my phone since I currently lack Internet and I hope you enjoy the rest of your holidays, and I can't wait for you next update, even if I'm on the turnpike home.

I think I hate you for this chapter. Please update soon, and I really do mean it for this one, you can't leave things off like this. :_: