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for The Rise of the Drackens

by StarLightMassacre

person Hannah
schedule January 10, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Would it be possible for little Leo to be healed by Harry's blood? I truly hope so.
person aly
schedule January 8, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I love this and can't wait for more but i am sooo scared for Leolin since he was like one of my faves. Waiting obsessively for your next chapter.
person Hannah
schedule January 8, 2014 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE DON'T KILL LEO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! He holds a special place in my heart. The thought of loosing a child is horrific. I don't think that Harry would be able to handle such a loss, I know I wouldn't. Leo reminds me of myself in some ways. He has certain needs that need to be met to insure his survival & I do too. I have a severe case of bipolar depression and anxiety. While my medication necessities & his low immune system are different situations he still needs special help like me. I want to see him survive & not give up on life. If you want to think of this in another manner, Harry would have a hard time testifying while he is still destroyed by the loss of his son. Please keep Leo alive.
person Me4Eva
schedule January 7, 2014 at 12:00 AM
As a rule I do not cry. I just don't. But when I read about Leolin and his possible death I couldn't help it. Love this fanfic and hope Leolin survives.
schedule January 7, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I gotta say I love this fic tons! I normally followed the chapters after they came out but, I took a break for a while and just came back. I've just read all the chapters concerning Leolin and after the last chapter I was totally floored. I really hope you don't wind up killing him he is so very unique to the story. I'm waiting for the next chapter and just hopping something good happens, but with the title for the next one it just leaves feelings of dread. Desperately hoping for a good thing next chapter!
schedule January 6, 2014 at 12:00 AM
This is the first time I've ever reviewed a fic but I couldn't help myself. I absolutely love this fic it's brilliant and amazing and everything I wish I could write. These last chapters have had me crying so hard my family became extremely concerned. You've truly mastered the art of evoking strong emotions in your readers and there aren't an overly large number of authors on here that have done that for me. I don't know if I'll be able to influence you at all but I am begging you on my knees if necessary to not kill Leolin. I don't think your characters deserve that but I guess it's up to you and I'll have to live with it. I don't know how to tell you how much I love this story. Thank You so much for posting this! I luv u soo much right now! Sorry if that's weird some people take that badly. And I'm rambling soooo....
person SierraFitz
schedule January 4, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I have been reading this story off and on for about a year and a half, and last week I decided to look it up again and read from the beginning. This story has pretty much been what I do in my free time, I have been constantly reading and thinking about it at work, just wanting to get home to read. This story seems so real and the emotions are so real and raw. I love this story and am so sad for Leolin, I feel like I might bawl for days if that little boy doesn't make it through because he is so strong.
person Rose
schedule January 3, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I have been reading your story for what feels like ever, and I love everything about it, your characater's are strong and amazingly well done!! Everything just flows together so perfectly! And I love how you write Harry, not every one delves in to him as much is feels you do and I find the story is just so floid that I can't help but re-read it every now and then between updates!!!

Thank you so much for shareing such a huge part of your awesome imagination with me(and well every one else that reads this!) I can never stop at just one chapter!
It has trully been an hounor taking this journy with you, and I hope you are well in good spirts!

Thank you again
person LingLing2482
schedule January 3, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Omfg. I started reading this story when there were only seventy two chapters. And I literally JUST made an account on this website just so that I could review this story. First, this story is brilliantly written! I love the plot, set up, long chapters, and character development. I look forward to every chapter posted. Second, I just read the most recent chapter, poison, and it had my holding back years of my own for poor little Leolin! (~_~) I honestly am praying for Harry to unlock some of his uncontrolled magic that he used to prevent the miscarriage he almost had at the party from fighting Amelle and heal Leolin. That aside,keep up the good work! (^.^)
person nikki
schedule January 2, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Please, please, please, don't kill Leolin, I positively adore this story but I don't knoI'll be able to continue reading if you kill him. You created this adorable and loveable character, and just the thought of him dying brought me to tears, hell, I'm crying right now,so please, don't kill Leolin.