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Please update chapter 85 soon

Omg omg omg omg! It was an amazing chapter!! Just....amazing! I'm sitting here crying but I'm glad that leolin is fighting! Thank you for posting it earlier than planned! Can't wait to read the next one! I hope you have a good weekend! :)

I have cried more in the last two chapters than I have for many a story in a long time.....

This is definitely a tear-jerker, yet leaving us hopeful that little Leolin will pull through.

I feel that you have captured so many real-life potential situations that I am eagerly awaiting the next updates (although it may be several weeks before I can get back to reading them due to real life butting its head in on me).

As far as this pregnancy, I hope Harry has at least one Malfoy and one dracken - although it would serve Lucius right for Draco's son to be a dracken!!!!

Keep writing as life allows .....

I have read this story from the beginning up until this point. Let me start by saying I loved the development and the writing of the first few chapters. Everything has been great so far up until Harry being upset with Remus. Even though you explained the reason I still felt it was a bit hypocritical and unfair on Harry's part. I know you won't agree with me but that's just my opinion.
There were a few things before the Remus and Harry thing that I felt were a. bit unfair as well; for example Harry's mates enabling his 'snapping' and telling him nothing is ever his fault. Sure everything wasn't but a few things seemed that way to me and I'm sure others as well. Also sanex "knowing better" than to come close to him is a bit harsh. Any sane person would have been concerned and probably followed as well, in situations ls where there is panic most people don't think first and act later, a concerned person would check on someone it's not like drakens attack him everyday so he just runs out of instinct.

Secondly I would like to comment on the treatment of Ashleigh or Ashley w/e it is. Most mother in laws do not like their daughter in laws or I this case a son in law, but they do however love the kids. She doesn't have to like Harry or even pay attention to him, her loving the children should be enough. It happens in everyday life, people are not required to like their children's spouse. It's very childish and petulant of the lot of them to treat her that way based on her feelings or her lack there of towards him. It just shows how childish he and his mates essentially are. Max shouldn't have to pick sides at least she tried to pretend to like him, god knows my grandmother openly expresses her dislike of my mother, and I'm sure that's not the only instance. Have you seen the movie 'monster in-law?"

Also the thing about max's uncle knowing better; what if he had left Harry and he killed his nieces? Would the parents of the children then be entitled to kill him? Because they say they'll kill him for tackling Harry but had he not there would have probably been lives lost. They are all enablers, the lot of them. I don't feel like they should punish Harry but everytime something happens he is always the victim and everyone else is a bad guy even when Harry is the aggressor.

Lastly I feel in the last installment everyone has been very inconsiderate towards max and this again comes back to childish petulance. He is human, a family member died and one almost did. Needing your own space is not a bad thing (as I recall Blaise did the same thing for something as insignificant compared to max's situation as studying) though he should be a dominant you are still portraying people with feelings and with those come these kinds of decisions. Yes his children kissed him and he should of at least came to see them but he was upset and hurting. When he did show up, instead of being grown ups everyone became very petty and started to gang up on him. People make mistakes.

Honestly I had to fight my better instinct to close this fanfic and read no further, not because Leolin was sick. I could hardly read through the childishness in this chapter. You started off very well but recently the quality has greatly dwindled. I'm not trying to flame you I just wanted to express my opinion.

I meant missed not kissed. His children missed him.

I was just wondering about Blaise. I know that people were debating whether or not he was a girl as well as his race. But I think it clearly says in the Harry potter books that Blaise is a 'black boy'. He is also played by a black actor. I noticed that in a lot of stories people always say he's white with shocking blue eyes, or green eyes or something other. I thought this was a bit strange because the other characters are normally always canon with their features. I guess what I'm asking is why you personally portrayed him as something he isn't in the books? I'm always curious to hear people's reasonings behind it.

I cried again poor Harry and Nasta and Blaise...and Draco and Max too lol and poor Leolin! I really hope there arn't to many more chapters like this cause this waiting thing is driving me insane! I can't wait to see the Daily Prophet get whats coming to them stupid nosy bastards...anyways can't wait till next time!

I'm sorry your break was ruined but thanks for posting the chapter it was a pleasant surprise. I a proud of Nasta being the top dominate and taking charge. Harry (I know is the sub but) was out of control. Its like he doesn't want Leolin to live (which I know is stretching it thin) demanding everything when he knows everything is being done to keep Leolin alive and to heal him. I also can't wait to see Harry ream and destroy the media he is not the little boy they think he is anymore.

Just wanted I have loved this story from word one!! Keep up the good work!!

I geared myself up for little Leo dying before I delved not this chapter. I was so afraid I wouldn't make through, especially since I just had to put my dog down yesterday! Thpugh it was a difficult chapter to read due to the different ways each of the mates displayed their grief, I am ecstatic that little Leolin is still fighting and hanging in there for now! Max's punishment was well done and thankfully brief even if for him he will feel it for some time! Nasta is so very strong, but I'm sure he would live nothing better than to just breakdown like the others if even for a moment. Being the top dominant sometimes is the most difficult part of being a Dracken! Wonderful chapter overall.

~~ Meechy