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for The Rise of the Drackens

by StarLightMassacre

schedule January 24, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Your chapter titles are fooling me! I keep thinking that Leolin will die after reading the chapter titles, but it's a great relief when he isn't dead. I really hope that Leolin gets better and I am so glad that Calix is getting better! :D
person lilly.n.g.k
schedule January 24, 2014 at 12:00 AM
well there go's another tissue box.... i really liked this ch...especially compared to the last... this one had a lot more going on in my opinion and was a lot less emotionally draining...i also don't now if it's just me but i detected a little bit of optimism near the end-so fingers crossed for nwxt ch ending with a smile-and little loe at home or on the way home....
person dominique1
schedule January 24, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter but still so sad poor leolin
schedule January 21, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Loved the chapter! I can't believe Braiden is already a year old, and soon the quintuplets will be a year old, too! And I'm kind of dreading the next chapter after you said it would be horror filled and tear jerking, I haven't been on Facebook so I don't know what it will involve! Oh I hope it isn't too bad!!
schedule January 21, 2014 at 12:00 AM
*sniffles* I almost held out, I thought I wouldn't be crying while reading this chapter. But then I remember a part in the Rugrats Gone Wild movie where Spike was about to drown and remembered Stew and his wife and then baby Tom saying his name and he found the strength to continue. My tears came then and I couldn't stop thinking about that scene and thinking that Leolin was remembering the same thing like Spike did! *sniffles* You always made a tear-jerking scene affect me, you are a brilliant writer! :')
schedule January 21, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Loved the chapter! I really do hope that Leolin gets better and lives, I really love that baby! You are absolutely amazing at writing stories and I am absolutely in love with this story! You are amazing!! :D
schedule January 20, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Loved the chapter! I just love how things are going in this story! Wonder what's the surprise in the next chapter going to be~! I guess I won't find out until I read it, obviously~! :D
person Kirrishar
schedule January 20, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Hello there! I have just managed to catch up to the most current chapter (would have gotten here sooner than a week on your story but sleep and work always interfere)! I am greatly enjoying your story, but you've made me cry. my heart bleeds for little Leo, and I hope that due to his Dracken parents he can pull through this!!!

Love your story, and please keep it coming :)
schedule January 20, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Loved the chapter! I loved that the kids are moving around a lot, and I loved the ending scene where Leolin copied everything Harry did; that was adorable! The fantasy scene was really good, so glad you added that in~! :D
schedule January 19, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Finally, after rereading this story I finally got to the chapter I didn't finish reading! Now I have more unread chapters waiting for me and school doesn't start until Tuesday!! I'm looking forward to those chapters!!

I am really loving this story! I'm so glad that I found this story, I just love it so much and won't have problems with rereading it many times~! :D