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Your reason for Remus being a dick was very weak. I don't even think you should've written that in. It made little sense and had absolutely nothing to do with what you have going on. It was a loose end that you either felt people were bothering you for or you had writer's block and flubbed something in.

I though Tonks Dad name was Theodore and that is was Teddy was short for? But then again I haven read the books in for ever.

This chapter was fantastic! Even all the better that no precious babies died, and that we get to know the twins gender! Happy Days! I absolutely loved the bits with Farren slapping away the Jack-in-the-box, and Braiden sharing his toys with Teddy. So much cuteness for me to squeal over :) I also very much enjoyed the tying up loose ends with Ashleigh and Remus, that made me happy that Harry is going to have two less situations for Harry to worry about less.

good chapter, I am very happy that Leolin got better and that Ashleigh is getting the help she needs. I hope Blaise will let his mates help him.

I am soooo enjoying this you really bring the characters alive and whew glad Leolin is going to be OK.

I had the tissues ready and am so happy that I only had to use them for happy tears :) thanks and keep up the good work :)

Once again another compelling chapter my complements it was a lovely change to the those tear jerking chapters very heartbreaking I also noted if I may that you mentioned Ashleigh as well as her correspondence to Harry. Another question however as I'm unsure as to whether you answered this question before however are Max's sisters Dracken or Human? I apologise in advance if I'm persistent with this question however will we discover what was Harry's paternal grandparents fate? As I have yet to discover a fanfiction which covers it in a small area. I'm relieved as well as glad that little Leolin is alright again well done such an enchanting tale I can't wait for the next chapter once again hope to your wellbeing DarkFasha564 xxxx

i don't think i ever felt such happiness when reading a fic as i did wile i red little loe's comin come...i cryed and was so happy i laughed at the same time...beautiful ch!!!
as much as it pains me to ask cos' i like the calm after the storm...whats going on with the trial?

Loved the chapter! I'm so glad that Leolin survived!! I really love him and the other babies, I hope nothing else life threatening happens to them!! Looking forward to the next chapter!! :D

I doing a great big happy dance here! I'm so happy that little Leo pulled through. It could have went either way because at that last stage it's just so easy to give up. Remus finally makes an appearance and tries to explain himself. Thpugh Harry is trying to move on and forgive, I think it will be a while before he will truly trust Remus again. It's wonderful how the mates support each other and give comfort how each needs. It's also good to see that Ashleigh has seen the light and is trying to get the help she needs. It takes hitting rock bottom for some to get a grip on reality. I hope she heals so that she can really be a part of the entire family.

~ Meechy