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for The Rise of the Drackens

by StarLightMassacre

person Emma
schedule August 20, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Omg you meanie!!!!!! Draco!!!!!!!!!

But really awesome chapter!!!! I hope Draco gets well soon!!!!!!
person morganabythesea
schedule August 20, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Why is Harry damaging his stomach muscles when he has a wand? Other than that wonderful as usual!
person Dominique 1
schedule August 20, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Is it mean for me to be happy it wasn't one of the babies I also hope that Harry becomes great friends with ezrah and Latham that the fairies start treating him better that ezrah can Bragg about the babies I leave very how harry was justice mode and poor draco but at least we find out about the poisoning I hope that the doctor is dracken than you
person Nikki
schedule August 20, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Oh I just love this story! I also love all of it's spinoffs. In particular I really like how you portrayed Snape's story, and how still the poor man (Dracken) still never got his happy ending. But I was wondering if perhaps you could write another short side twist where perhaps Severus Snape FINALLY got his happy ever after? Please? As a fellow writer I understand that sometimes you just can't or have no desire to write something so if this doesn't appeal to your Muse then by all means disregard my request. That being said please keep up the fantastic story! I just love reading it's evolution.
person lenxa
schedule August 20, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Arr a cliffhanger I'm gunna be in waiting in suspense for the next chapter. I wonder if this has anything to do with the potion draco was taking in the beginning hmm....
I am impatiently awaiting your next amazing chapter please don't leave us in suspense for to long though I'm sure there will be another delightful cliffhanger at the end of that chapter for us to wonder over as well lol
person Jane
schedule August 18, 2014 at 12:00 AM
YOU. YOU. YOU. I ABSOLUTELY ADORE YOU! This story gets me so freaking emotional. I don't even know why I cried over this last chapter. This story is my go to story. I love Nerys and Idris and I can't wait to meet Nasta's grandparents since hello more awesome people!!! The babies are gonna make me cry with all their awesome development. Random thing though, how will Nasta and Max get everyone to know that they are all mated? I've been dying to know what they have planned. But on another tangent, THE BABIES! I just can't get over their cuteness and I don't know how you can write all of them so fantastically! All of them (adults included) seem so real and natural and you just get sucked in to their lives. I can't even believe it's been 2 years that they've been mated though. Where has the time gone? I've been meaning to write a review for the longest time. And I'm so sorry I haven't actually done it because you deserve every awesome compliment of all kinds because you are just phenomenal and I've been reading other stories of yours without even realizing it (umm hello Damaged Bodies, Growing Lives,Building Families which btw is also mind-bogglingly fantastic)

P.S. I can't think of enough words that truly describe how much I love this story and its subsidiaries and your other stories so yeah just a reminder you are freaking awesome :D
person Viral
schedule August 16, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Darling I'm amazed to see you back so soon and impressed by your strength. I'm sending my best wishes and blessings to you dear. And Dain and Kailen's story! I totally wasn't expecting that. :) But it's a beautiful, tragic story and I'm so glad Harry ended up letting them see the kids. It should be fun to see how they deal with the little bundles of (not only joy, but also) terror. :) I get the feeling Tegan will have them wrapped around her adorable little fingers. So happy to see you back. :) May need to spam you with baby pictures until we have all eight on Twitter.
person staar
schedule August 16, 2014 at 12:00 AM
New reader !!!! First let me tell you that it took me 4 days to read all of this.....and I love it !!!!!!! This new twist to the Harry Potter stories is awesome !!!!!! This has everything I love in a story....You have made me laugh, get mad, cry EVERYTHING !!!!! When baby Leolin got sick I almost died with all the crying !!!! Well I'll stop now or I'll never will....I need rest and then I'll go and read your other stories !!!!!!! see ya soon !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person starlight fan
schedule August 15, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for the update, it was amazing. Will you ever update "The Life and Trials of Harry James Potter-Malfoy?" I really enjoy your writing, it's fabulous.
schedule August 12, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Yaaaaaaaaaay,an update!!!! I must admit, this fic is my alltime favourite creature fic!! I've read a few other good/amazing ones, but the effort I can see going into making this fic brilliant really pulls me in:) most of my fanfics I read on fanfiction.net, but I wanted to read rise of the drackens in its original form, not an edited one. The babies are amazing and I would name everything I love about them, but that would take forever!! I love the detail about the creatures, societies etc et that you wrote and especially how realistic it is, like the birth and so on. I don't usually like harem-type fics, but this one is amazingly well-writtenXD I look forward to getting to know the twins better, and to meeting draco's kids one day, when harry has recovered and ready hahaha. Greatly anticipating the next chapter=D