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for The Rise of the Drackens

by StarLightMassacre

person Jane
schedule August 23, 2014 at 12:00 AM
You just made me tear up. Silly goose. I didn't even realize you dedicated this to me. I'm embarrassed with happy little butterflies floating around in my head. Yay!!! But to the story!!!! Is this where we find out about how the potion has messed with Draco??? I'm just gonna assume that this is all because of the potion because I don't want Draco to be sick from something else!
person magentah
schedule August 22, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Agh I'm glad I came back and checked my review, because half of it is missing!

I'm still worried for Draco, but also for Harry as well (between the not sleeping, pushing himself so hard, and potential damage to his stomach). I loved how everyone pinched in to help Harry memorize the potions ingredients. They are such a good team! :) Glad the faeries are nicer than they seemed--rude guard aside--and feel for their story. When you live so long, what's three decades, anyway? The interplay between them and Nasta's family (also fascinating in their own right) was great! His uncle is a hoot.

Again, thanks for continuing to share this story with us and update so frequently. Hope things are going well in your own life! I'm still bummed at the end of this chapter, but what I didn't get to say in my last comment is that I really don't think that's a *bad* thing. You write very well, and I think it's a testament to your writing and story that I'm worried for the boys and annoyed at having to wait to find out what the bad news is. Luckily I have some Scaled Bits to catch up on in the meantime!
person kk
schedule August 21, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Omg you must be pure evil! I'm mostly scared because I think you have threatened to kill Draco off before!! Wow, great chapter star your stories are amazing and just keep getting better and better!
But you're still pure evil!!!

Lol
Thank you for the lovely (EVIL) update!
person NallaAsh
schedule August 21, 2014 at 12:00 AM
No! Damnit, its not Fair! Poor Draco! :(((
person magentah
schedule August 21, 2014 at 12:00 AM
The perfect pay back for what? Great chapter! That ending, though.. I was already having a bad day, and my mood is definitely worse now. Really looking forward to the next update.
person Kat
schedule August 20, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story. Draco doesn't have dragon pox does he? That would be bad.
person April
schedule August 20, 2014 at 12:00 AM
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAGGGGHHHHHHH SO MANY CLIFF HANGERS IN ONE CHAPTER MY HEAD! My head shall explode XD noooooo !!! Your fanatic stories are my personal torture!!!!! XD
schedule August 20, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Gosh, I can't even imagine how crazy harry must be going, having to study potions and looking after babies, not to mention the amount of laundry they have!! Draco really should learn how to do more household chores, though I suppose we all love his haughty attitude hahahahah. Noooooo, why??! Harry doesn't get a break, does he?? First his children in the hospital and now draco!! I really hope draco doesn't suffer for too long. This can't be good for harry's studies, I won't be surprised if he fails his exam, seeing as he'll worry too much to study properly. At least he does have a extensive extended family to help them look after the kids, but still. Harry and his mates really have it rough. On the other hand, I can't wait for Ezrah's visit, though I suppose it won't entirely be the happy affair they thought it would be and I look forward to seeing what Braiden is going to get up to, now that he started climbing hehehe.
schedule August 20, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Loved the chapter! Really love that Braiden is starting to climb over his cot, and I love that Nasta's family are accepting Dain and Kailen!

Really hope Draco is okay, and I hope that Healer is trustworthy; don't want him to find out about Draco being a Dracken and holding or handed him off to poachers during those five hours!
person staar
schedule August 20, 2014 at 12:00 AM
OMG poor Draco and Harry... Draco's father should not have said that Harry would hurt him EVER !!!!! Loved the update and will be waiting for the next one !!!!!!!!!