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for The Rise of the Drackens

by StarLightMassacre

person Kristen
schedule October 1, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE THIS STORY!!! I love how you give each of the children their names, and the meaning behind them! And I can't wait to see how the rest of the story turns out. And I'm wondering when you're going to update 'The Life and Trials of Harry James Potter-Malfoy'? I really want to see how that one turns out as well. I love that story as well.
person Ebony
schedule October 1, 2014 at 12:00 AM
This is my favorite story and I love the black heir story so as long as this story isn't abandoned I don't mind.
Keep up the excellent work
schedule October 1, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Loved the chapter!
I'm so glad that they found out what was wrong with Draco, and I'm glad that the beginning of the court scene was added to the chapter! While I wanted to read the whole scene in one chapter, I'm glad that you didn't put it all in one! :D

And I loved the baby moments, I can't get enough of them! :D

Really looking forward to the next chapter and the rest of the court scene! :D
person Anonymous
schedule October 1, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Why is Harry so pissy, controlling and temperamental? Ugh. Not like the real H.P. at all.
person Anon
schedule October 1, 2014 at 12:00 AM
So happy with this new chapter. I was ecstatic when I saw you updated. I'm so relieved that everyone has found out what was wrong with draco before it got worse. And I'm so glad for the update on Ashleigh I had been wondering what was happening to her. Keep up all the amazing writing I look forward to the next update.
person Anon
schedule September 25, 2014 at 12:00 AM
this chappie was very 'slice of life' which made for a very nice change from the usual drama and chaos.

do we ever get to find out what was wrong with dray.
schedule September 21, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Hi,
finally I too managed to catch up with this story. Although I wasn't that good as others to read all the 94 chapters in a few days. I read this for weeks now (about 5 or 6 weeks maybe). I am a slow reader and as English is not my first language, I read even slower. Also it's good, because it kept me busy for weeks. I love this story. It is really far from other HP fics, but it is cute with all the babies.
I hope that with all the other stories you write you'll have time for this too. I'll check on your facebook regularly and eagerly as well to see if you finished with another chapter or not.
I'm too concerned about Draco's fevers. Although I'd love to read about him more (because I think he's really in the background for long), but not at this price.
person Kay
schedule September 18, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Hello Star~ I love this fanfiction, though I haven't been able to read it for awhile (Since you started the Tribulation of the Blue Moon really) but I have recently rereead the entire thing, and I am still in love with it! However, and I don't meen to be nitpicky, in chapter 89 I believe you said that Charlie, Bill and Fleur didn't know about Harry's creature inheiritence, but before the quints were born, Harry and Charlie had a discussion about Drackon guestation periods where you dropped the hint that the baby would be viable at 4.5 months. Again I don't mean to criticize, amd I'm sorry if it comes across like that.
person Leski
schedule September 11, 2014 at 12:00 AM
FINALLY!!! I caught up with the story. It took me three and a half days to read all of it and now my family are worried for my sanity. I love this story and your dedication to it. To write for over three years.......wow. I have tried and only got to a few months before my mind wandered to new things. Again. I am sooook glad you did not Give up on this story. I started reading it on fan fiction a few years ago(before the dracken babe's) and some how lost track of it. My birthday is coming up on the 18th, but I will be sure to check up on it soon. You have a great vacation. And thank you, thank you for l the smiles, tears, and love in this story.

With love and good wishes
Leski
person bluekitnaru
schedule September 11, 2014 at 12:00 AM
i have a question why didn't maxes mom just tuner it into a tell like oh did you know that its the subs family that normally takes the baby...something like that or was it merely for plot?