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for The Rise of the Drackens

by StarLightMassacre

schedule May 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I don't think they're ooc much. And as a stylish dracken female (rare dominant female perhaps?) i think Blaises mother will welcome Harry. Very cool story and great update.
person Larimar
schedule May 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This is a GREAT 2nd chapter! Younreally took the story and continued with the unique creature and plot! Can't wait for the next chapter!
schedule May 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
So glad to see this updated! I'm interested to see how Draco will get into the mix.
person Anon
schedule May 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love Blaise's choice between his sanity and Harry that was awesome and Harry is so cute trying to be stubborn with his dominant! I can't wait for the next chapter =)
person Orkchild
schedule May 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Per canon Blaise only has his mother and she is a multiple widow, with his dad being several husbands ago. Also she was considered dark neutral.
person MaleahLynn
schedule May 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Great Chapter!!! Was surprised when it was Blaise in the Forest. Wasn't quite who I had expected. For your question, I think his parents would be neutral. I like how the Malfoy's were doing whatever they could to get their family through, but I hate that they had to play to the dark side and be so cruel. I think Draco as a lighter/grey character proves much more fun. He can be a more dynamic character if it can be shown that he really just puts on the tough guy mask to protect his family, when really he hates the whole war and thinks its just utter insanity.
person alma
schedule May 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Awesome, for a minute there I thought it was severus after Harry in the forest. As for Blaise's parents, have them love Harry, and malfoys love him too.
person Shadowwolf03
schedule May 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Darn... I was so looking forward to Severus Snape being a dracken. I'm still going to hold out hope on that one. But, I do like Blaise Zabini and I'm okay with this change in direction if the story line. After all when you adopted it I knew it was going to take some new turns. Instinct has helped him out so far... however, Harry's going to have some quick learning curve, as always. I'll continue to look out for updates in future chapters and don't get to disappointed if I don't review too often. After all if I was a writer rather than a reader I be posting my own stories rather than enjoying others.
person CHARbones
schedule May 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
oh my goodness this story is fantastic!! I love submissive harry and his creature inheritance :D Don't give up on this story anytime soon, you write it well! Update soon please and thank you!!
person SilverLion
schedule May 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Personally, I'm enjoying this so far. Shame that the original author couldn't continue (like I've got room to talk, I've only finished one multi-chaptered fic). However, I will point out that canonically, Blaise is black. He may be Italian (his last name implies that), but he has black skin. But, whatever. Anyhoo, I like Blaise's parents being neutral (or one Death Eater, one neutral; or perhaps recent spies). Lucius and Narcissa....I like them how Rowling made them: Their main concern is their family. Regardless, I will continue to follow this story.