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Can I read the original I would love to see both please let me know

so happy, a new ch! Great one, I'm really loving this

Getting better and better... but please add the disclaimer at the top of each chapter so this story does get hidden away from public viewing. Okay, I accept that Severus may not end up one of Harry's mates initially but at least make him a dracken... pretty please with sugar on top.
For those reviewers indicating flaws that are non-canon in nature, it's your storyline and what direction and how you chose to portray the characters is your decision. We might suggest or desire for certain things to be in place but ultimately it's up to your story weaving skills to pull us all in as we surrender to the enjoyment of a good read. Go with your muse and sorry that your other story currently is suffering while your imagination gives birth to this newest inspiration.

Please, Please remember to add the disclaimer in any manner you chose so this story doesn't disappear. Thanks.

I love this story. It's brilliant. And I must say that you gave me quite the surprise when revealing who the dominant was...I was almost sure that it would be someone more well known. I mean, Blasie is just a minoe character in the books...
Anyway, I do hope that ypu'll continue on this soon. casue I really can't wait to see what happens.

I'm so in love with this story! Can't wait to see what happens next, keep up the great work!

Great, great! Please update soon!

Blaise's dad should like Harry's spunk while his mother should have problems with his obvious defiance.

Please correct your disclaimer

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SOOOO glad that you have adopted this. LOVE Life and Trials so looking forward to how you develop this. :) Oh and btw, love slash and mpreg so please write away!!!!

Great ch, loved it! Loved that it was Blaise :) I think his parents should have been neutral in the war, and like Harry, but not gushing like you know? Idk about Narcissa & Lucius, surprise me