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for The Rise of the Drackens

by StarLightMassacre

person SilverLion
schedule June 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
You had a chronological error near the end of this chapter. If Harry's in his sixth year, then he's known Ron and Hermione for five years, not four. Does he have anyone from Gryffindor who's still a friend? What about Luna? I don't think I've ever seen a fic with an evil or bad Luna, and I don't think I would ever want to read one (though I did read one with a Death Eater Neville called 'Pretty Little Secrets' over on fanfiction.net).
person MaleahLynn
schedule June 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Squee! Lol. I LOOOOOOOVE this chapter! :) I was sooo excited to see it up so soon. -glomps- I love authors that actually post on a regular basis and not a month and a half later. -gives plate of dragon cookies-
person Jeanette
schedule June 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for taking a great idea and making it your own. Love creature Harry and his mates. Blaise is going to be a great mate.Looking forward to seeing who else comes out of the woodwork. I think Charlie Weasly should make an apperance. Either as a potential mate or an expert Dragon handler lol. Looking for more more more! xoxo Nette:)
schedule June 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Is snape going to be a mate? (sorry it kind of got suggested in the first chapter so i was wondering...) anyways well done! please update soon
Kit
person PandaGaara
schedule June 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Aww poor Harry I wonder when he's gonna tell Blaise about his thoughts and feelings. I just have a feeling he's gonna explode. And Draco is so gonna get a shock when he gets his head out of his ass. I can't wait for that to happen. Update soon!!
schedule June 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
woah, Blaise huh? I would've picked Snape for sure! At any rate, Blaise is going to have a royal bun fight to hold onto Harry.
So, what will Harry's friends make of this? And I don't know if Harry would be willing to be shared with other males. He hates being special as it is!

You're right, not much is known about Blaise family. I think they should staay nuetral but be supportive of their son. Being Slytherin I can't see them going for anything other than top quality if they could get it and dispite his shabby treatment by his rellies, Harry is quality plus. Besides, I get the feeling he and Harry are going to have enough issures to deal with.
person CHARbones
schedule June 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
:O Thank you for the loong chapters. They are quite lovely :D
I'm glad that dumbledore (so far) appears to want what's best for harry. It's just kind of silly in my opinion when authors feel they should bash him or make him a self serving evil bigot.
schedule June 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I demand more. Right this second! Because I can't wait for another pleasingly long chapter with a bunch of horny dominants scrabbling about, vying for Harry's attention! >=3
schedule June 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Well damn, i was enjoying that one too. :P
But sometimes you just need to take the inspiration and run with it, so please, run, be free and create further awesomeness.
Well, that answered my Q about his friends... though surely the twins wouldn't have abandoned him. (did they live in this?) I'd think they'd be stoked and Charlie would probably be delighted and fascinated. lol
Does Harry have any allies in Gryffindor?
I'm with Harry in his worries over his sub nature. He wouldn't take well to his instincts making him all submissive and he'd loath being sub to someone who was cruel.
person heartstar
schedule June 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love this I hope to see more soon! LOL I would love to see how draco fits into this...