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June 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I like the idea of for mates, with 2 of them being OMCs
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June 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the new chapter - I'm really enjoying "TRotD"! About a potential OC mate for Harry: I usually am very skeptical of any fic that involves more than three people in a single relationship; a harem-type story is hard to do believably.
HOWEVER, in this instance I actually rather like the idea. It fits in well with your plot. You've already made a big point about powerful submissives needing 3 or 4 mates, and you state frequently that Harry is very powerful. Both Draco and Blaise are quite young (teenagers!) and have similarities in personality. Maybe a 3rd mate could be a bit more mature (like mid-20-something) with a personality that compliments the others, that would make up in some of the areas where they lack? I was already intrigued by that nameless/faceless dominant that scooped Harry up in the hallway - the one that was "so protective, so strong and powerful". Unless that one WAS Draco, I like the idea of him returning in the future as an OC mate.
Whatever you decide, I look forward to reading more. :-)
HOWEVER, in this instance I actually rather like the idea. It fits in well with your plot. You've already made a big point about powerful submissives needing 3 or 4 mates, and you state frequently that Harry is very powerful. Both Draco and Blaise are quite young (teenagers!) and have similarities in personality. Maybe a 3rd mate could be a bit more mature (like mid-20-something) with a personality that compliments the others, that would make up in some of the areas where they lack? I was already intrigued by that nameless/faceless dominant that scooped Harry up in the hallway - the one that was "so protective, so strong and powerful". Unless that one WAS Draco, I like the idea of him returning in the future as an OC mate.
Whatever you decide, I look forward to reading more. :-)
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June 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
more pleasse
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June 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Aw, Harry is just so cute in this story, and I'm glad even the elder could see it. Harry and Blaise are so cute together right now, and has Draco just not gotten his inheritance yet or what? The others are certainly going to kick up a stink when Draco becomes a mate though if both Harry's mates go to school with him. They might start yelling foul play. As powerful as Harry is though I can see him having another mate, it might be good for him to meet someone new. Looking forward to more!
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June 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapter i love how annoying Harry thought the other dominants were! can't wait to see what happens next =)
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June 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
again lovely chapter :3
When will you introduce draco as a dominant dracken? No pressure or anything, I'm just curious... though I suppose I should just wait and see yes?
When will you introduce draco as a dominant dracken? No pressure or anything, I'm just curious... though I suppose I should just wait and see yes?
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June 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I think an OMC would be awesome, it's always fun to be introduced to new strong characters. I love the story so far, and cannot wait till next chapter.
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June 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm really starting to love this story! Can't wait for the next chapter!!! Blaise and Harry are so sweet together! I think keeping it Draco/Harry/Blaise would be good - but throwing in some OC's could be fun too!
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June 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I rather like this Harry. Sweet but very capable.
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June 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
JUST WANT TO TELL YOU HOW SICK AND DEPRAVED YOU ARE FOR WRITING A SLASH/MPREG STORY!!!... just kidding i love your writing style and i had to make fun of the AN everyone seems to write it that way these days... well keep up the good work