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for The Rise of the Drackens

by StarLightMassacre

person Nicky111
schedule June 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I think you should keep it Harry/Draco/Blaise. I liked this from the very beginning and I think if you throw in another mate it will be put too many main characters into the story. I also think it will draw away from Harry's character. He does not seem like the sort that would have hardly two mates he trusts let alone three.
schedule June 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I like this story so far, even though it took me forever to read these chapters today. Not that that's a problem, mind you. :) I look forward to the next one. I like the idea of just keeping it the three of them but if you do end up adding a fourth, I like the idea of the guy Harry smiled at too.
schedule June 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
looking forward to the explination. As for Snape, welll damn. He didn't deserve that. Will we find out who it was?

Adds another plug for omc goodess (yeah, i know i already voted but i feel sorry for em. came all this way for nuthin and as powerful as Harry is, shouldn't he have the max amount of mates without making him whoreish.)

Also, just because they've killed doesn't make a person bad unless they kill indiscriminately, I hope Harry will understand this. it;s like soldiers, just cause they kill at times doesn[t make them bad. Add the creature blood and Blaise doesn't kill for fun.

Also, if they stopped and explained the reason for why they do things, like not wanting Harry alone, it would make for a lot less blow ups.
schedule June 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful update. Hmm...tempting....maybe Viktor Krum as a third mate to the addition because it's Viktor. :D
person hayley
schedule June 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
i vote for the added omc to the grouping, the already mentioned character sounds cool, although another would do just as well
schedule June 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hello!!

In regard to Harry's mates; I personally enjoy the idea of Draco, Blaise and Harry as well as the Dracken he smiled at during the hotel period. More than anything to show Harry's power with more mates.

It will be interesting to see what you decide on, but so far I am hooked onto this story and can't wait for an update.

Please continue this brilliant story as your doing such a great job.

Best wishes.
Sarah xx
schedule June 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hello, again!!

Sorry, I forgot to ask: Since I'm asuming Draco is a Dracken, how come Harry and Blaise haven't sniffed him out yet as a dominant Dracken?? I also asume Draco has had his birthday, since he had a growth spurt, so wouldn't HP and BZ know he's a Dracken??

Thanks, once more.

Sarah xx
person Anon
schedule June 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love it :)
person Charlie
schedule June 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love your story bu i think it should remain a Draco/Harry/Blaise story
schedule June 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I was so happy when I saw that you'd put up another chapter for this story. Like I said before, It's brilliant.
I feel so sorry for Snape when you told what had happened to him. But perhaps Harry having lessons with him wouldn't be too bad. And I really love Blaise, he's adorable.
I've been thinking about the other mate, and I would suggest perhaps Charlie Weasly. That would be rather fun if he was the second or third mate (what ever you decide to do)
I can't wait for the next chapter to come. I hope it won't take too long. And I hope that it'll be just as long as this one, cause that's something that I really love about this story.