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for The Rise of the Drackens

by StarLightMassacre

person chameleon
schedule June 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
this is such a great story!!! keep up the wonderful work!! personally i like the idea of another mate for harry...he deserves all the love and attention he would get from having a few mates.the omc from the previous chapter wouldn't be bad...he sounds handsome.
person toriew
schedule June 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story, though I do wish Blaise would be a little less controlling and explain his actions to Harry more. My vote is for Harry to have a third mate, and preferably an OMC. I'm really looking forward to the next chapter!
person heartstar
schedule June 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I think harry should have draco , blaise, and blue see too. Is Harry the offspring of sevs mates... was lily that powerfull that she needed another mate too so if would be sev, james and lily and then they died? Am I reading to muching into the story? let me know if I am correct please...Lara _Wakim@yahoo.com
schedule June 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm so glad that you decided to continue Jayde Alyxandre's story. It is really interesting so far, and I can't wait to see what happens next. As far as the pairings go, I'd like to see it stay with just Draco/Harry/Blaise. If you do add in another person, though, I think Viktor Krum should be the one to be added in. I hate to say this, but if an OC becomes a major character, I'll probably stop reading, and I REALLY don't want to because I love this story so much. (Not that one less reader would hurt.) It is just my opinion that if I'm reading fanfics, I want to read about the real characters from the series. To me, major OCs should stay in original stories.

BTW, I'm sorry if I sounded rude, because I'm not trying to be.
person sanda
schedule June 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
good story, I like it
I want an extra mate thrown into the mix, an OMC, or Charlie Weasley, or Viktor Krum
person FoxJaFire
schedule June 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I feel bad for poor Theo, I hope he finds someone to love him. I can't wait for Draco to really start coming in! I will be waiting in suspense. -Ja
person Shadowwolf03
schedule June 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I wouldn't mind Snape being one of Harry's mates or even the blue eyed stranger OMC that tried to get him to safety before getting tackled by Blaise. Here's hoping real life easy up a little and lets you continue to post fairly regularly.
person ReadyAimFire
schedule June 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
What a fabulous story! I love the dynamic between the characters! I have never been a huge Blaise fan but I am loving what you are doing with him and Harry! I vote for Draco to be the second mate! Keep up the great work! I can't wait for more!
person Hoshi
schedule June 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
If we can still vote, I vote for Blaise/Draco/the six foot eight inch dominant Dracken with the gorgeous blue eyes who Harry smiled at in a precedent chapter. Thank you.

Great story !
person Rebekah
schedule June 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Love the story, very well written! This is the first B/H I've ever read and I wish there were more ones like this! I like the idea of H/B/D but I'd always love another OMC thrown in there too!