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for The Rise of the Drackens

by StarLightMassacre

person mnfm
schedule June 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This chapter (6) is my favorite so far. The talk with the Headmaster and Harry's point of view about "older mates" and how unfairly they have been treated was very touching. I hope he gets an older mate (and please get Snape a new one).
person tamikolee
schedule June 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I'm going to vote for Harry/Blaise/Draco, more than 3 can be confusing. One for either side of Harry when he sleeps because I hate the thought of separate beds for each dominant. I also love the romance of it, all sleeping together to protect their submissive, I can't see another dom snuggling up a dom because the submissive only has 2 sides. Love the story, and Severus is soooooo Harrys father lol.

;) tamikolee
schedule June 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I am really loveing this story. I realy think you should have a 3rd being and older OMC. Mainly 'cause I feel bad for the older ones. ~Smiles~


All my love The Maiden Lyra
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person lizziebeth
schedule June 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I just have to tell you how much I'm loving this story. I'm actually checking back daily just to see if you've updated. Personally, I vote for Draco/Harry/Blaise/OMC (preferably a bit older Dracken, just cuz the older guys need love too!)
schedule June 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
i would like to see an Draco/Harry/Blaise/Male OMC story but have the OMC be Older because Harry isn't vain and i would like to see him with someone older.
person Dopeydd
schedule June 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait for more. Love the idea and where it's going.
person tamikolee
schedule June 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Love this story, please, please, please just make it Blaise and Draco as Harrys mates. Also I
have a suspicion that Snape may be Harrys father???
person Anon
schedule June 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Other male character should be Harry's fourth mate. Draco still with one more added on. I think. It it was some one from he books it needs to be a 'lighter' personality. someone playful to not be so serious with Harry. I think.

Love the story hope you continue and update even sooner.
person Athena
schedule June 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Nice new chapter!! I look forward to the next!
As for the pairings: I like the idea of HP/BZ/DM/VK orHP/BZ/DM/OMC ...
But it's up for you to decide :)

Athena
person thiensky
schedule June 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I have to say I'm liking this very much. My vote is definitely for Draco/Harry/Blaise. Buuuuut I DO wanna see that pretty blue-eyed Dracken from before come back so yeah lets throw him in too xD. After all Harry IS extra powerful. I like the twist with Snape about how his mate died. It makes it much more believable now why he isn't panting after Harry. But OH NO! I hope to god James Potter didn't steal/rape Lily. Do you know how devastating that will be for Harry when he finds out?? Though it would make sense as to why Snape's not chasing Harry. That's probably a little too close to incest AND he probably brings up bad/depressing memories.