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for The Rise of the Drackens

by StarLightMassacre

person SilverLion
schedule June 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I was wondering why no one's noticed Draco being a Dracken. Is it because he hasn't changed yet? I'm guessing that the OC-mate will be chosen at this meeting and Draco at the next. I could be wrong and will be delighted whichever way you play it. I hope you liked my suggestions for his name and appearance (the OC-mate).
person heartstar
schedule June 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OH wow I would love to see who harry chooses, I know you said that it may change the mate number I mean I hope to see more when you can.
person queenreader
schedule June 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I read this story recently and really enjoyed it. Sorry for not reviewing then. I was reading quite a bit but apparently not reviewing anyone. So I was very pleased to find you again by accident.

The point of this - before I forget(!), is that I would like to be added to a notification list if you have one. My email is: queen reader 51 @ yahoo dot com. Eliminate the spaces and, of course, . the dot. Thank you so much. It's so much easier for me to follow a story to the end if I'm not constantly losing it. Whether 'losing it' refers to your story or my mind... I'll never tell.

I'm going to go reread this story now. Hopefully, I'll have something constructive to offer you when I'm done.

schedule June 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Don't knock your job. Puts food on the table yeah? I know a bit about how hard you guys work as my sis is a check out chick. At any rate ty for the up date since life is so busy.
So, when will harry get dets on male subs and breeding. he's seriously gunna need em.
Also, I thought subs could order a dom away for good... or is this nepotisum for the council mans grand kiddie?
I hope Haarry does go with his idea of meeting the oldest first. That'd be such a boost for them. I'm glad he's got Blaise with him this time out as last time was sort of a free for all.
It'll be interesting to see if Draco will be mate number 2 or 3. ^^
schedule June 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I was just flicking through some of the reviews (they bring up interesting pionts occasionally) and there have been a couple pushing for canon characters as number 4 in the mix. I say let the OC's have a shot. Canon Characters anyone can do (tho with rons attitude I'd be surprised if he didn't have a bit of something in him. such a hot head.) but to have an oc and make it fit the dynamic (especially as we also have Malfoy in the mix)will be something interesting indeed. ^^
(though it would be fascinating to see someone make Harry, blaise, draco and Mio work... jsut not here. =P )
schedule June 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
As always I love your chapters. I love the relationship between Harry and Blaise. Even though I knew that there would be no chicks this time I feel sorry for them. I hope it works better with the next mate. I can't wait to see who it turns out to be. And I must say, I really disslike Dominic. I pray that he will never get close to being Harry's next mate.
Anyway, I hope that you'll be able to update soon. Cause I really love this story
person Anne
schedule June 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Great work as always. I love this story even though it's not THE most original plot in the universe. You have no idea how much I look forward to reading every new chapter.

I just have one thought though: I was wondering if Harry's going to exclude some dominants because they already have human families? It just seems to me that Harry's too kind to seriously consider the married dominants. Sure, all the doms instinctively want submissive drackens. But mating with Harry would mean that they would have to abandon their wives and children, and I don't know if I can see Harry putting up with that even if it meant giving everyone an equal chance.

Please let me know what you think. And though it is selfish of me to ask this of you, please update soon!
person Draconia Lesoto
schedule June 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Please, please, please, KILL DOMINIC! I really don't like him...
In other News - this story is still going great, i can't wait till Harry finds out that Draco is also his mate! And whatever Blue Eyes (the name i've given the 6' 8'' blue eyed guy in my head) name really ends up being should be beyond amazing, something really cool ( I suggest Ayden, Desiderious, or Camden)... Anyways, still going great but i have a question - I know you don't like Dumbledor (I am a faithful reader of The Life and Trials, but i'll get to that later) so is he going to be as bad in this as in the life and trials or is he not going to come into play as much?

Onto point two - UPDATE THE LIFE AND TRIALS ALREADY I NEED MY LEXIN FIX!!!!!!!!!.... I mean i've been such a good little reader, all patienct and even reveiwing a lot... I deserve a treat don't ya think?
schedule June 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hello!!
Once again, what an amazing chapter... this story is really shaping up.
I love how you made Harry's dracken hate Blaise's even though they knew they couldn't create chicks without another dominant.
Draco being a Veela is anwesome. I can't wait to see how this turns out and how the Veela and Drackens will co-exist with Harry.
I honestly can't wait until you update again. Harry with the dominants is thoroughly amusing and now he has Blaise, it will be more so.
Please update soon!!
Best Wishes.
Sarah xx
person Draco's Luv Slave
schedule June 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Love this story soooo much. I think the other Dracken should be a submissive like Harry. I think the other submissive should be Hermione. It would be a great twist. Draco/Blaise/Harry/Hermione. PLEASE THINK ABOUT IT????