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for The Rise of the Drackens

by StarLightMassacre

person Myniephoenix
schedule June 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Lovely. Truly lovely.
person GuiltyPleasure
schedule June 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I am loving this story!
person Mary
schedule June 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ok, throw in the blue eyed cutie too, Max... As long as the dominants do NOT have sex with each other, that'd destroy the whole purpose of having subs and doms :P I HATE it when a dom plays sub. It's.... Gah. So throw in Max, but keep every dom away from each other in bed. I mean, why would they need Harry if they can have sex with each other and you even said other dom/dom had wound up killing each other. In other words, I'll love the story as long as there's no dom/dom sex. That's not to say I'd be opposed to them taking Harry at once, together. Though no kissing, touching or sex between them.
person lovers hatred
schedule June 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
love it I vote for the foursome.
person tacita18
schedule June 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
The story has a potential! It is an easy read, quite pleasant and most importantly, interesting. I hope you will keep it up till the very end.

I beg you... I know there was a vote and now it's already decided that Harry is going to have 3 mates. But please... don't introduce an outside character, not one from outside the fandom. It kills the mood actually.

If I may propose someone... make it Severus. I know he had a mate and lost him; therefore, he is not looking for a new one. But... but maybe he deserves a chance. And with Harry he will have an opportunity to fix his past miastake, to care for him more, to have chicks and a family. Like a second chance from the Fate :)
He would also bring some stability and reason to the relationship... wisdom, let's call it. And well... him and Balise with Draco going down on Harry is simply a HOT image, don't you think? :)
person Jadeevans
schedule June 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Although I believe that a threesome is more than enough... I believe that in this case, adding Arsenio and/or Maximilius or another character is for the best. But adding to many mates is just to much.

On the note of Draco, I thought that he was going to turn out as a veela. Him being a Dracken turned out to be a great surprise.
schedule June 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh you had to leave it at that cliffhanger! I like other Harry/Blaise/Draco/OMC idea, though I'm torn between the first older dominate and Max. Though i think Max would be a better choice as the first guy might treat him a bit too delicately. I'm also wondering what Draco is going to say. I know that it probably won't be anything too mean because he's trying to woo Harry.

Oh and before I forget was Snape's mate Sirius' brother? I just had to take a guess!!
person Draconia Lesoto
schedule June 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yay! VIOLENCE! Hehehe :DD Thats such a good way to make me happy - good old fashion murder :) And even more yay - Max (who's middle name i ADORE) but what gonna happen with Arsenio? Now i'll feel bad because i like him and he's not Harry's mate... And Henley! ... Spin Off? Maybe?

YAY YAY YAY! I'm gonna get my Lexin fix, Oh! I'm gonna get my Lexin fix!!!!
person mistalis
schedule June 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Loved this part, and its so very easy to fall for Henley. That boy just makes you want to cuddle close to him, and watch over him. In some ways he seemed more submissive then dominate but that's just part of the charm of him. Oh and now... I hope that pompas arse of a grandson gets it... LEAVE.
person jaden
schedule June 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
hp/bz/dm/oc (OC being that nice older dracken)