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Oh I hope the harry and Blasie gget to have Draco, Arsenio and Maximilius That is all I want for them becuase Blaise got along with thses too and is friends with Draco?

I just had a thought: what happens to the "widowed" submissives? I would imagine that the need for dominants for breeding/grounding wouldn't decrease with age, so what if one of the sumissive's bounded dominant died? Wouldn't they then choose an older dominant?

Great work, by the way. The sex scene is steamy and I liked how Blaise wasn't an overly jealous bastard about the second/third/fourth mate. Update soon!

This chapter was brilliant. I love this story. And I think that you cut it in the perfect place. It's an awesome cliffhanger, cause how will Harry and Blaise react on having Draco there? And I'm so glad that you let Harry beat up Dominic. that spoiled brat deserved it, and more.
I would love it if you let it stay a Darco/Harry/Blaise story, but I'm not that against to throw in a OMC in the relationship. It's all up to you, cause I'll keep reading anyway since I love the story.
I can't wait for your next update.

wonderful story i have enjoyed it greatly and i am looking forward to how harry's mates will interact.
Personally i would like harry's mates as Maximilius Diadesen Maddison- most Dominate sexual mate/Blaise- second most Dom sexual mate/Draco-third most Dom sexual mate and a grounder/Arsenio Demetrius- least Dom minor sexual mate and a grounder.
Max would provide for physical needs (food, potions, etc), Arsenio would provide for emotional needs (guidance, wisdom, extreme care), Blaise would provide for intellectual needs (learning, active wit), Draco would be the punching bag and fancy accessory (sorry i don't like draco/harry pairings as a general rule only harry(dom)/draco(sub) pairings make any sence to me)
However i am looking forward to the next chapter as are a lot of people are i believe so i will leave you to your writing and life.

I found this story today and gobbled up all the chapters! I love it! Not only do you write well, your story line is also well thought out with great characterization. I vote for a Blaise/Harry/Draco & any other male...thanks for writing this story! I can't wait for the next update.

Yee Haw!!! Nice chapter and definitely a vote in favor for HP/DM/BZ/OMC! Keep up the fantastic story you have going. I have been thoroughly enjoying it.

I really think this mate finding is going to go on for too long if you have a third. I know some of the characters you are making are sweet and all but keeping it to HP is nice. I want other stuff to start happening not this same old same old mate getting stuff for another three plus chapters, unless you plan to make that more interesting the next time around (and don't make it a vote, it's your story). So if I had to say, then I would prefer you to stop it at Draco Blaise and Harry. Plus I was hoping for DP (since they have to mate together) and didn't want to see you try with three going for the one place (0.o). K I'm done.
Really loving the story otherwise. It's like a cross between indago and veela inheritance problems (I believe it's called). And finally we see Draco! Also I applaud your swft updates, but even then the story feels like it's dragging on. Keep up the great work, this is on my watch list :)

HERE WE GO lol the 3rd and fionally mate, DRACO lol

Dun dun dun!!!!!!!! I like Max. Arsenio is okay. I don't think that it would work for Henley. Harry wants to mother him. That would be demeaning for Henley and as a dominant, that wouldn't go over well. I do think they should be good friends though. He seems like a good kid. And you are such a tease leaving it at seeing Draco for the first time. *pouts*

Lovely. Truly lovely.