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for The Rise of the Drackens

by StarLightMassacre

person fudge
schedule June 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
love this story, great ch, thank u!!
person jessica
schedule June 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I vote for Draco/Harry/Blaise/OMC.
person thestralhorse
schedule June 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love this chapter, it is amazing i am so glad that Draco is now Harry's mate =)I can't wait to read more!!!
person PandaGaara
schedule June 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
WAHHHH! You just love leaving me wanting more. I wonder if Harry will have to go through another Dracken gathering for another mate because I want Max to be one of his mates so badly. I do have to say you've made me love OMC's like no one has before and I love you for it ^_^. I hope you update soon so I can find out what happens next.
person KaPooK
schedule June 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Finally finally ^^ Draco!!!! he he love it !!
person MrE-Quecky
schedule June 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Loooved this chapter :D I am still voting for Max as a fourth addition though :D
schedule June 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I adored the new chapter and i have to say with all the OMC's in the story and how very well written they are I cant help but want harry with all of them. Keep up the good work!!! LOVE IT!!!
schedule June 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Okay, I'm going to be honest. I do like this story but I really think that instead of adopting a new story and then pouring everything into it, you should really work on Life and Trials of Harry James Potter-Malfoy. Or at least be honest with your readers and tell us if you're having problems writing the story.
schedule June 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
LOVE THE CHAP!! Blaise should kill DominICK 4 being a jackass, and now Draco can help because they are his babies too. I would LOVE to see Max as Harry's other mate. I am a bit biast though, my favorit color is any shade of blue. Besides Max sounds like the PERFECT guy, well to me anyway. Besides his eyes sound like mine, and I love my eye's electric coloring more than any other blue color, is that wrong?
Anyways, so my question is, how is Blaise going to enjoy sharing his Harry with his best friend that is notorious for not liking to share? Also could you explain the whole chicks thing to me please? How exactly is it that Harry will be getting pregnant and who the father will be of the clutch born. Also, when he gives birth with they be a live birth OR will the chicks be born as eggs and then hatched like a dragon? The egg thing would make since because they are technically dragons they just have a human form insted of a reptillain form. But at the same time the live birth would make since too, not being able to figure it out is maddening so I decided that I HAD TO ask before I hurt myself trying to figure it out.
schedule June 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant chapter. I loved the interaction with Draco. And I love that he's Harry's second mate. Can't wait for the heat to start...Why do you keep bringing Dominic back? Why couldn't he just accept that Harry has no interest in him? And the plan he had was horrible! I loved the quiet Nasta. He seemed like such a perfect guy for being quiet with, you know, those comfortable silences that are so hard to come by. And Henley is just adorable.
I also loved that it was Draco that saved him during the first meeting. I did not see that coming. Brilliant.
I can't wait for the next chapter to come. I hope it doesn't take too long, cause I really want to know what happens.