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Tell me that Arsenio, Maximilius, Jensen, are still alive please I liked them.

*applauds* Loooovvvveeeeeddddd it :DD

I think i speak for anyone (with a heart anyways) when i say that as much as i love new chapters if you're running yourself into the ground to get them out than i'd rather wait an extra few days than have you so stressed that you make mistakes and could possibly come to not like the story.

I have a question however about the wings of dominitates - Is it possible for them to change? I mean early on once they've inherited or are they the color they will be from the get go?

This story has captured my attention quite fully. I love the way you write and develop the characters. Oh, and, if I can still cast a vote, Draco/Harry/Blaise/OMC is it :3 (Or whichever the order is)

I have to say that I just love reading this. It is a very good story and the plot makes one want to keep reading until it is done. Now that Harry has chosen his second mate the only thing to happen now is for them to mate and then for Harry to find his third mate. Between Arsenio and Max I have to that I can't really choose between them right now until Harry gets to know them more. If I could I would choose both of them they are just awesome. Well I can say is that maybe the one who's not picked could have a one shot with Harry. Keep up the good work with the story. Can't for an update.

ZOMIGAWD!!! I am in LOVE with this story. You are one of the few people out there who write really good OC's and if this does turn out to be Harry/Blaise/OMC I have no idea how you are gonna choose between them. Keep doin what you're doin!

hey,
oh I only want to say that I love this story...
and I can't wait for the next chapter, your so mean to end there
kyargh

Liebe Gr

Awwesome. Well, that's one mistery solved. No wonder he was hitting on Harry. I hope he isn't too harsh with him. Poor Draco though. All that uncertanty... still this will make things eexplosive later. kukuku.

pls, pls, pls say we can kill that slime and his bastard grandpapa too, pls pls pls. I want them to die in mangled agony after being shamed and humiliated.
*rages around on Harry's behalf.
Dieeeeeeeeeeee, kill, rend, tear, harm, mangle, slaughter, evicerate, strangle stomp, maiiiiiiiiiim!...
*stops, panting for breath before straightening up and brushing myself off.
Anyway, you get the idea.

I;d loooooooooooove if there were two OOC;s but I'll take what I can get. ^^

didn't spot any major mistakes so kudos there... but then I was rushing through to find out what happened. :P
Gotta say yours is one of the stories i actively look for and pounce on when there's a new chappie.

Do all subss have such strong instincts for young?

I hope Henley gets a really nice sub, he's such a doll.

Harry, with three lots of colours plus white will have rainbow wings... how pretty. Makes me wish I was talented enough to draw him. ^^

I loved this chapter and the way you worked Draco into becoming Harry's second mate was clever. Thank you for posting. :-)

Love this story I always wait for the new chapter. Max or Nasta ooooh hard choice good luck picking which one gets harry cause I feel bad for for the one who doesnt get him and you havent even written it yet....by the way 1 vote for Harry/Blaise/Draco/OMC.