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I love your story. I hope Draco will learn fast not to mess with Harry. Submissive or not, he won't take orders from nobody. I love your OMCs, but I like Nasta. He's the strong, silent type.

First I want to tell you I love this story and am always looking for the next update. I am one of the readers who would love to see Harry with an older mate. I think it would help Blaise and Draco settle down and be a family easier. But I know you will work it out and I will just enjoy the story anyway. Even I have started to work out my own version in my head. Thank you again for doing such a good job. Donna

Max all the way! Or all three, but Maxcomes first!
And if I were Harry, I'd get back on Draco, or refuse to sleep with him for that kind of abuse. "In his nature", sure, but Blaise haven't been spanking or abusing him till he is an emotional and docile mess. Nasta can have Draco's place if that is how he intend to treat his lover, the mother of any child he could have. Draco just pissed me off here, so with Harry's temper, he should be plotting revenge or curling in on himself the moment Draco tries to touch him again. I wanna see Draco sorry for what he did, even if it was "within his rights", there should still be limits as to how much Harry has to lie down and take. The hair or the attitude did NOT warrant such punnishment and was more of Draco's excuse to spank him! Harry can't be okay with this!

i had a thought... how can the poacheers tell if a kid is going to be a dracon? I vaugely remember reading that only the mum gets to pick up that scent as s/he and the chicks are usually in seclusion for the birth? If that's so, are the poachersw buying sight unseen and hoping the gamble pays off? Even with Harry as powerful as he is there's still no guarentee that the kids will be Dracon... is there?

This story is actually marvelous. It's well-written and engaging beyond the smut, which is something I look for and often rare, and I can't wait to see what happens next. The characters are believable individuals, and I think you kept it in-character when it comes to the canon ones. I'm so excited for the next chapter! It's honestly really interesting and well-done.

this is a great story i can't wait to read more

after the connection made between max and nasta... i can not imagine harry having to pick between the two. It would be great to see them both interacting with harry...especially as mates!

Excellent work, I adore "The Rise of the Drackens". I love the relationships between Harry and the other characters and I believe you present their personalities very well. I would love to read more when you update, and I look forward to it. However, I'm a bit new to AFF and have not noticed any "Story Alert" similar to that on Fanfiction.net. If it's not too much trouble, would you kindly be able to guide me to it or if you have time, would you be willing to notify me when you update? I look forward to reading more. Thank you for all your hard work.

Jo Manta
bakuraryoulover2007@yahoo.com

This is awesome! I can't help but think that having another submissive come into their inheritance would be cool. That way 'Sen and Max can come back and Harry can explain what happened while giving the other submissive a "push" in their direction XD lol Those two are great and deserve love! ^.^

If you would be interested in actually doing that and would like to bounce character ideas back and forth with me, or want to adopt a character out of my mind so the muses for said character will leave me alone, please feel free to email me <3 My mind is constantly coming up with characters and I lack the time and attention to do anything with the poor dears T.T

Keep up the great work! Now that I've read all the chapters so far, I'm going to go back and review XD lol This might take a while, but at least I got this one up ^.^ *huggles*

(Okay, lesson learned, never make a "heart" symbol in a review. The site recognizes it as hmtl and will cut off one's review XD lol)

I absolutely love your story and I really enjoy your characters and style as well~ You keep a reader on the edge of their seat, and I love it! (Even if I have to sacrifice a few hours sleep here and there * insert heart symbol here * ) So if I don't review often (due to being too rum-dumb to type XD lol)I just want you to know that I really do enjoy your story and hope that you will keep up the awesome work!

And if you're ever in the mood to chat, or need someone to bounce ideas off of or anything, you can always email me at mischief.muse@yahoo.com Sadly I don't have the time or attention to write, BUT I'll always make time to help out a writer any way that I can! * insert heart symbol here because I'm not dumb enough to fall for the site's oddity again *

~ Mischief Muse ~