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for The Rise of the Drackens

by StarLightMassacre

person kstutz
schedule April 28, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Dear Starlight Massacre,
I have absolutely loved this story and can't wait to see where it goes. I have read the entire thing in just a few days and it has taken up my entire mind. I am fascinated by the story and plot you have created. As well as the changes to the HP universe. I love where you have taken the canon characters and the characters you have created yourself. I think they fit in so well. I absolutely adore the children esp.

I also really appreciate that you are addressing the abuse that Harry went through. I think that that is something that J.K. Rowling (queen that she is) had as one of the few lacking areas of the books. I always wondered why the things they did to him were never really handled by the other adults in Harry's life. There was the one scene in I believe it was either Goblet of Fire or Order of the Phoenix where the Dursleys were threatened but that was it.

I also love that you don't let anyone try to tell you how to write your fanfic. The times you have chewed readers out in your author's notes have made me laugh. I love that you stand up for your vision and don't let anyone sway you from it. You have a real talent and I can't wait to read anything and everything that you have and will put out in the future.

One thing that I would like clarification on is your use of the words "when" or "for" instead of say "time." Is this a cultural or a British English thing? I am just curious because it did throw me when reading a few times. If you could enlighten me I would really appreciate it. :)

Keep up the great work! I can't wait for the next update!

-kstutz
person Original-Sin
schedule April 27, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for clearing that up :) I love the fact that Richard is a badass in the court and that Myron was so kinky lol
schedule April 25, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I really love your stories, all of them. I've been reading them for over two years and I love the personalities that the characters have. When I read the stories they play like a movie in my mind, I enjoy rereading them as well.
schedule April 25, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I normally review on ff but I was reading on here and too tired to go to ff. I was hoping to finish but I only made it to 58. I leave for a cruise tomorrow so I may read some in the morning but not sure. Either way, I'll be back to this story Thursday night!!!
person Tat5934
schedule April 24, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for this chapter! I missed this little family ^^
I hope the case with the Dursleys will be over soon because poor Harry doesn't deserve the horrible things that Vernon says to him in court.
I can't wait for Harry's next heat period :-)
person Sai Sixx
schedule April 22, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! I feels so bad for Harry for all he is going through, but I also like seeing how Leolin is growing. I also love The Dracken Memoirs too, and can't wait for the next part I hope Nasta is the only grounding mate needed. ~♥~
schedule April 22, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Loved the chapter!
I am loving the court scenes, I don't know how a court scene is runned either, so anything you put will run smoothly with me! :p

Love the baby moments, too. Little Leolin is developing so nicely, he's starting to lash out like the others did. Not good that he's lashing out, but it's a major development from how he was before! :D

Love the little scene in Myron's kitchen, needed that bit of humor before the court scene and I'm sure Harry needed that too. ;)

Love everything about this chapter, as usual, and I'm looking forward to the next one! :D
person starr
schedule April 22, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait it'll the court case is done with Harry has to much on his plate !!!!!! and would love to see the Dursels get like life !!!!!so I see my baby Leo is getting just like his brothers he is hitting now , Nas will stop it !!!!! love my little one !!!! Thanks for the update !!!!!!:):)
person Jan
schedule April 22, 2015 at 12:00 AM
It's good that both Draco and Eva are both ok, please update chapter 99 soon.
person NikiNakole
schedule April 22, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Still love this story almost 100 pages in. Hey, so what is going to happen to 'The Dracken Memoirs'? I really got into it and would like to see it continued.