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I love this story followed closely by "The Life and Trials of Harry Potter Malfoy." I like the idea of either or both Arsenio and Max as Harry's third mate. If Aresnio was chosen, the older doms will see it as a positive sign that they might one day be chosen while a different message was sent to the younger doms - youth is not everything. Max, on the other hand, would have a little pay back to the sub that rejected him so cruelly. The choice is hard there. Personally, I would not want to make the decision on how this choosing goes as I would probably wind up stating Harry was too powerful for three mates and needed two to ground him.

I have two questions:

1. What is in the book Harry was reading that worried Draco so much?

2. Is Severus' mate Regulus Black?

I found that for update notices I have story and author alerts checked on FFN and when I get the notification from them, I come immediately to AFF to read. An idea might be to post on your author page a link to your site on FFN and tell readers to check the alerts there.

I'm looking forward to the next chapter of "The Rise of the Drakens" and, hopefully soon, "The Life and Trials of Harry Potter Malfoy."

Wolfmistress

You say that you have no real excuse for you having taken six DAYS to update this story. But what about The Life and Trials of Harry James Potter-Malfoy? What is your excuse for not updating that story when you were cruel enough to end the last chapter in a cliffhanger? If you can't figure out how to continue it let your readers know. Otherwise, well shame on you for neglecting an established and very good story for one that you've adopted.

Maximilius is my vote ^_^

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Well i was one of the readers who wanted all three for Harry, but if forced to choose, then it has to be Maximilius
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Max should be the third one, he seemed so sweet. Are Blaise and Daco gonna sell the scales they took off Dominic? That I believe would be a very fitting thing concidering thats what would have happened to the chicks. You are a very talented author and I believe you could become a great author should you choose to right a book and have it published, if you ever choose to do that let me know I'd love to read it. Also will the haircut come back into play anytime soon or was it just for this scene? It seems like it could be either. Also will Lucius play any part in this story? If so how come he hasn't already apart from Draco being nervous about being a dracken? 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I hated how abusive Draco was in this chapter. I realize that you established the dominant-will-punish-submissives-when-they-disobey system at the beginning of the story, but I thought it was more like how Blaise used his power over Harry. While Blaise only punished Harry when he thinks Harry`s refusing to take care of himself (like with the clothes), Draco seems to punish Harry to sooth his own ego. I found the fact that Draco kept on hitting Harry even after he begged him to stop especially revolting. That`s not a healthy relationship, and I don`t understand why Harry won`t do something like sending Draco away from his bed. It`s like you`re trying to give Draco a blank cheque regarding his behavior in the relationship, that no matter what he does, Blaise can`t interfere and Harry can`t hate him because of his chicks.

What happened to the strong Harry with his own ideals and opinions. What happened to the Harry who won`t be a doormat?

Please explain this to me, I`m afraid I don`t understand why you choose to take such a turn in the story.

Most confess that when they started torturing Dominic I kinda felt sorry for him, after all he is just a kid, and he had been drinking potions to supress his instincts, but Dracken or no Dracken, anyone who could risk a child to gain money, deserves to suffer horribly. I really like the fact that dispite everything, Blaise, Draco and Harry aren

Interesting. Are these flear ups going to happen often? If so, the Harry might want to look into finding a spell to toughen up or at least numb his rear. Go Harry, you stick up for yourself. I wonder how he'll make them let him keep his hair short.
Will they really sell those scales? Ah well, that brat may as well be of some use.

Awesome chapter, i love that everything is tense and everyone isn't suddenly just getting along! hmm if there is one more dominant i like Maximilius most but i wouldn't say no to all three being added either i like them all =)

Loved how this went... I do have to wonder... with that failuar of a creature now dead... are they going to sell his scales and blood? It would be kinda fitting that the thing that wanted to hurt and sell their chicks would end up helping to pay for the nice life the galleons could give them.