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July 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Nasta and Maximilius... I LOVE Nasta after that chapter... I want to be a Submissive Dracken to claim Nasta for myself!!
Regulus Black seems to be the most likely character to have been Severus' mate.
Cant wait to see how you continue and who you choose as Harry's mates or if their is another
best wishes
sarah xx
Regulus Black seems to be the most likely character to have been Severus' mate.
Cant wait to see how you continue and who you choose as Harry's mates or if their is another
best wishes
sarah xx
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July 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I've been having problems leaving reviews, I don't know why, but I'm going to try agian. I LOVE this story. Older? 16x2=32 would be the average for older. When I was 16 I had a 22 yr old bf, he didn't act much differant then a teen, depends on the person. I love all 3 of your OG men but it would seem to me that Nasta and Harry have a stonger conection, though I wouldn't mind seeing Arsinio at all, I think I must throw my knuts to Nasta.
Thank you for the wonderful story *.*
Thank you for the wonderful story *.*
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July 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Right, first things first: oops? Sorry, I should have known there was a reason for Draco's behavior. Sorry I went off on you, it was apparently completely undeserved.
Now, when it comes to the age question, I think Maximilius would probably be considered an older "young" dominant and Arsenio and Nasta an "older" dominant. In this case, may I suggest that you adjust the "half plus eight" rule and instead just try doubling Harry's age? Because technically everyone older than twice Harry's age is old enough to be his father, and I consider people old enough to be my father, well, part of a different generation. That being said, I think Maximilius is awesome and should have the chance to become mated to Harry. Twice is the charm? He is the one who the Ravenclaw girl rejected, right? He is almost all a dominant mate should be: handsome, strong, understanding, charming, etc. But he is a self-described "child at heart" and I'm afraid I've never been sure how to think of people who say that as if it's a good thing. But it might be better to make him Harry's fourth mate (if you are planning to go for four mates) because with this whole unstable Draco situation, Harry might need a calmer presence in the form of an older dominant to "stabilize" the nest, so to speak.
As for choosing between Arsenio and Nasta, each have their pros and cons. From what I understood of your characterizations, Arsenio has a very strong moral principle, but is very worn down with all the previous submissive refusals. As such, I think he's a little too submissive, so much so that I worry about him not being an equal in the relationship with Harry's other dominants. Remember when he was first introduced, you made a point in mentioning how he immediately backed off whenever Blaise expressed some form of disapproval toward his actions? I understand that you meant it as "Arsenio is polite and courteous regarding the first mate authorities of Blaise", but it made me feel that perhaps there is an age whereby someone becomes "too old and too worn out", and Arsenio has passed that age.
Now when it comes to Nasta, as I understood it he's very patient, understanding, and brooding. He already showed that he has no problem standing toe to toe with Harry's existing dominants, while able to go against instincts to make Harry happy (handing Harry off to Draco). He also showed that he has a very strong moral code, and he's very protective of Harry. The only interesting thing is that I think he will very probably be able to out silence-treatment Harry, which in a relationship stand-point should prove amusing. My only objection to the match is his intense streak of independence. Nasta seemed like the type of guy who is very used to dealing with all his problems himself. This might create an emotional distance between him and Harry should there be issues that would need to be discussed between mates, but Nasta might not be open to that discussion because he's so used to being independent.
That being said, I think I would prefer Nasta as the third mate and Max the fourth. If Harry should have only three mates, then I think I would cast my vote for Max, because I think he might be caring and nurturing enough to make him a good final mate for Harry.
So now that you've read all that, do you regret asking for my opinions now? Never let it be said that I'm afraid to speak - or in this case, type - my mind.
Update soon!
Now, when it comes to the age question, I think Maximilius would probably be considered an older "young" dominant and Arsenio and Nasta an "older" dominant. In this case, may I suggest that you adjust the "half plus eight" rule and instead just try doubling Harry's age? Because technically everyone older than twice Harry's age is old enough to be his father, and I consider people old enough to be my father, well, part of a different generation. That being said, I think Maximilius is awesome and should have the chance to become mated to Harry. Twice is the charm? He is the one who the Ravenclaw girl rejected, right? He is almost all a dominant mate should be: handsome, strong, understanding, charming, etc. But he is a self-described "child at heart" and I'm afraid I've never been sure how to think of people who say that as if it's a good thing. But it might be better to make him Harry's fourth mate (if you are planning to go for four mates) because with this whole unstable Draco situation, Harry might need a calmer presence in the form of an older dominant to "stabilize" the nest, so to speak.
As for choosing between Arsenio and Nasta, each have their pros and cons. From what I understood of your characterizations, Arsenio has a very strong moral principle, but is very worn down with all the previous submissive refusals. As such, I think he's a little too submissive, so much so that I worry about him not being an equal in the relationship with Harry's other dominants. Remember when he was first introduced, you made a point in mentioning how he immediately backed off whenever Blaise expressed some form of disapproval toward his actions? I understand that you meant it as "Arsenio is polite and courteous regarding the first mate authorities of Blaise", but it made me feel that perhaps there is an age whereby someone becomes "too old and too worn out", and Arsenio has passed that age.
Now when it comes to Nasta, as I understood it he's very patient, understanding, and brooding. He already showed that he has no problem standing toe to toe with Harry's existing dominants, while able to go against instincts to make Harry happy (handing Harry off to Draco). He also showed that he has a very strong moral code, and he's very protective of Harry. The only interesting thing is that I think he will very probably be able to out silence-treatment Harry, which in a relationship stand-point should prove amusing. My only objection to the match is his intense streak of independence. Nasta seemed like the type of guy who is very used to dealing with all his problems himself. This might create an emotional distance between him and Harry should there be issues that would need to be discussed between mates, but Nasta might not be open to that discussion because he's so used to being independent.
That being said, I think I would prefer Nasta as the third mate and Max the fourth. If Harry should have only three mates, then I think I would cast my vote for Max, because I think he might be caring and nurturing enough to make him a good final mate for Harry.
So now that you've read all that, do you regret asking for my opinions now? Never let it be said that I'm afraid to speak - or in this case, type - my mind.
Update soon!
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July 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I still think that Nasta should be one of the the older mates. the way I read the dialog leads me to think that he had the most compatible personality to Harry's, though you could also include one of the first 2. I think it might get confusing if there are too many more new potential mates introduced, but that is just me. It just seems to me that Nasta has a calming maturity that Harry responded well to, and he seems to like cuddles. ;)
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July 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Your story has a very nice plot! I love how you really define the Drakens, and that you didn't make them have amazing godlike powers over everything. It gets really old when people create creatures that have telekinesis, elemental control, super speed, super smart, et cetera! I look forward to stalking this story. ^_^
I want to throw my vote out there for Nasta. He seems like a person that could explain things to Harry, Draco, and Blaise. Also, the teeth discussion piqued my interest!
I want to throw my vote out there for Nasta. He seems like a person that could explain things to Harry, Draco, and Blaise. Also, the teeth discussion piqued my interest!
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July 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad that Harry is back to normal. I was wondering if Harry could spend more time with Maximilius and Arsenio before I choose which dominant I would like for him to have. I think that I have only seen Maximilius two times and Arsenio once. Is Harry going to be pregnant before he gets his third mate or is he going to become pregnant when he gets his third mate? I would like to know or are you going to keep it a secret?
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July 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'd say all three if you really want to go for a big bang.
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July 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love Nasta!!! Great story!!!
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July 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
23 degree heat?? Bahahaha, that is a mild day, talk about it being hot when it is over 35, or even 40. But apart from that, good chapter, I skimmed a little of the gore as it was a bit graphic for me. Your update rate puts me to shame when I can only manage a new chapter every fortnight or so!
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July 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hello,
I love this story. I like the way you're writing the differents characters. I like Nasta a lot. As for you asking how 31 and 36 could not be old, I must say that yes to a 16 year old, even 21 is old. I am 51 and I remember that my children said that I was old when they were teenager, even now, at 20 to 25, people at 30 are perhaps not too old, but still old, especially if it is to bonding or marriyng with them.
So, I would like to see Harry be with Nasta, because it seems that he already took his advice and like him a lot as a friend.
I apologise for any nistake, because my first language is french and I only learn english in reading all by myself. I give you a lot of chocolate ( it is THE treat from my country Switzerland)
Read you soon
Phoenix
I love this story. I like the way you're writing the differents characters. I like Nasta a lot. As for you asking how 31 and 36 could not be old, I must say that yes to a 16 year old, even 21 is old. I am 51 and I remember that my children said that I was old when they were teenager, even now, at 20 to 25, people at 30 are perhaps not too old, but still old, especially if it is to bonding or marriyng with them.
So, I would like to see Harry be with Nasta, because it seems that he already took his advice and like him a lot as a friend.
I apologise for any nistake, because my first language is french and I only learn english in reading all by myself. I give you a lot of chocolate ( it is THE treat from my country Switzerland)
Read you soon
Phoenix