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for The Rise of the Drackens

by StarLightMassacre

person jane doe
schedule July 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
max and nasta
schedule July 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I've managed to read your story in a couple of hours and all I have to say is bravo. lol Anyways, You know have a new follower and as for the vote that isn't a vote, I want all three, even if it looks like Nasta is winning. lol See you next chapter. ^_^
person red713
schedule July 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the new chapter! I liked Harry's "cologne prank" - it was cute and mischevious and seemed very in-character for Harry. On the other hand, I hope he doesn't continue any sort of pranking after he forgives Draco; constantly bringing old grievances to attention AFTER you've made up is just bad for a relationship.

Since I haven't put my two cents in about the mate issue since I first voted for a H/B/D/OC, I'll say that I like the two dominants that you've spent more time developing: Nasta and Max. We haven't seen or heard from Arsino (sp?) since they first met, and if I didn't always see his name by the voting tallies at the bottom of every chapter, I'd have already pretty much forgotten about him.
person magentah
schedule July 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Aww, I'm glad Max is back! I'm also glad that as hurt as Harry still is, he isn't going to let his bond with Draco disappear. Nothing reminds you how much you appreciate something like the possibility of it being taken away. :) Remind me who Arsenio is? Oh hell, I suppose I can just reread (oh! the hardship!) to find out. My vote is for Max and Nasta. Can't wait for the next chapter! Thanks for updating so frequently. <3
person Kab Bishop
schedule July 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Awww Max is so sweet!!! Can't wait for Draco to be forgiven :D
person thestralhorse
schedule July 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love Nasta but i can't not vote for Maximilius so i am going to go for both of them lol Awesome chapter i can't wait for the next one
person Anon
schedule July 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Maximilius and Nasta
person Draconia Lesoto
schedule July 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOOO!!! I hate cliff hangers!!!! that's so unfair!

Well anyways, I love how the Prank with Draco turned out (XD), but i'm disturbed by how Harry's Dragon is reacting so suddenly, wouldn't it have reacted the day/night after the spanking happened if it was going to react at all?? But YAY! Max is back :DD

Sorry, i'm still sick and a bit loopy from the meds :/ Oh well... There was something else i wanted to say... well if i remember i'll Reveiw again.
schedule July 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I love this story. It is amazing and I can't wait to see what you have in store for it next. I hope Harry gets Draco good. :)

xoxo,
kitkat
person Crazed
schedule July 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OMG the vote between Nasta and Maxie are so close and I've fallen in love with both characters so PLEASE I BEG of you, lol, make both of them Harry's mates!! In fact I love all your OMCs except the ones you've already killed off and Harry is in need of some extra loving so why don't you include all three b/c that'd be awsome!!!