rate_review Reviews

Can I still vote? I vote for all 3, it would make the story sooooo awesome even though it's already amazing. And here I thought all new hp fanfic stories. You've renewed my love for hp

I don't think Harry's a kiss ass, just weird, I think if he really believed it was induced by the potion then he wouldn't be going around telling people about it, especially since Harry has a big pride and don't want people to see him as someone who needs help and everything, it seems like he's purposely trying to get sympathy votes even if i know Draco is definitely in a wrong, potion or not. Sorry he seems just a tiny bit OOC by doing that. And I feel Blaise even with the law should have interfered, because even if he would be cast aside, killed or taken out as one of the mates, it would still be better than Harry getting that badly hurt?

All in all, I love your story, hopes Draco gets forgiven though not that easily, but I hope Harry's dracken don't reject him either.

Nasta! Though I feel like you already have your own choice in mind and the vote don't count. Why do I feel like Max's going to win? Nah it's ok I'll have Nasta to myself then if he didn't win.

i really like this story, i found it two days ago and read it all at once. i know that you're counting the "not really" votes for a third mate for harry and i vote for nasta for what its worth; im really drawn to what you've shown of his character. (the way you write him reminds me of the tristan character from the king arthur movie from 2004) and i like the way that nasta treats harry; everyone should have a strong silent type ready to rip out someone's heart to defend them. (i think the playing with hair part, from the last chapter was adorable)

i think the way you have shown blaise is really good too, he is one of those people who you can do anything with because there's not much from cannon. and thank you for adding the italian translations in the chapters. personally i only speak english and when an author puts in the effort to add another culture/language it is nice to still be able to understand what is happening and what people are saying.

i guess that's all, i will be looking for the next update. thank you for writing this, i am enjoying the story a lot.

I love this story! Please, please update soon. As for the vote that is not a vote I WANT ALL THREE! Or at the very least Max and Nasta. I think it would be a great idea to have another submissive, either canon or oc I don't care which and then they could have the dominants that Harry didn't pick because I really feel so bad for Max, Nasta and Arsenio. I mean really how can you not, they deserve a good submissive, please give them one. Oh and Severus needs one to you cannot forget him.

I have to admit at first I was all "oh god not another one who piles too much information in the first chapter and then it's all animalsex from then on!" but I have to admit I like your story. I'm not one for blaise/harry but i really like the displaying and ceremony involved in your story. Also I really like Nasta :3 he's a sweetheart. and why not i'll throw in my guess as well, Snape's mate, that was the ravenclaw girl from a couple years ago wasn't it? the one who held the choosing ceremony at hogwarts?
anyway, love your story hun, i'm waiting for the next one!

i could live with max and nasta but i would rather have it be just nasta...nasta nasta nasta nasta

Maximilius

All three of the above

I read this way back when it beloned to the original author and then when you took it over, I was rather thrilled--it's so much better now. XD And a lot longer. Haha. But anyway, I thought I'd finally review and give my two cents even though I know you've already made your decision, most likely, I just thought I'd vote on the whole mate thing for Harry. XD
Even though I like the idea of Blaise and Harry and reluctantly, Draco, I really, really like the other three main OC dominants you created as well. Arsenio, Max and Nasta. And I think it would be interesting to see all 6 of them together--you made them so damn likeable and I feel bad for them. I've never had the chance to read a Moresome fic where it's actually written well, has a plot and isn't just sex. Though the sex between all of them would be epic. Mmmm just the thought of Harry getting molested by all of them and loving every second of it, sounds so delicious. And besides the fact, you could pass it off easily enough with Harry needing 5 mates because of how ridiculously powerful he is and well, lets face it, nothing normal ever happens with him--remember? I hope you give them all a happy ending reguardless, the older dominants deserve it. =3

i love the idea of maximilius and nasta as the next mates. i love those two :) but that would leave harry with 4 mates.... is that too much? lol

i love how this story has taken off. i cant wait for updates so i go thru and reread it all lol