rate_review Reviews

You are so cruel were you left the story hanging. So cruel!

any who, I sit here with baited breath waiting for your next chap. I love this new twist you have so glibly slipped in there. I still want Nasta, but it will put a 180 twist to the story if it is a completely new guy. but with the big I think that hints of Nasta.

so what your saying is, is Nasta isn't the newest edition. That's a shame. He seemed the nicest and his age was a bonus to your plot since you mentioned Harry doesn't care about age, yet he has two teenagers as mates.

Update soon

I think this new mate should have a shot. Harry is actually not totally pissed at Blaise and Draco which means he might have a chick thanks to this guy. Plus, he obviously wanted whoever. I say THREE MATES!

OK, so I've been reading some of the other reviews and one in particular caught my attention. It said that you mentioned that Drackens (submissive drackens) can only have one new mate per heat. In this case that means Harry would have had to reject Draco for this new mate to be called. IF that is what happened, I'm no longer on the hate side of the Marmite effect. However, I'm still not on the love side either because while most reviewers thought that lemon was hot I found it a bit disturbing. Especially, if this new mate is truly an unknown character =/

Actually, I don't mind the twist on principle, but I am disappointed that it wasn't one of Harry's known prospective mates joining them- like Nasta (who won the vote, after all) or Max. Instead, we got a complete stranger. I don't really understand why, since you had so many nice and enigmatic characters to choose from! To be honest, I feel kind of cheated after that useless poll, but it's your story, so whatever.

a wonderful new chapter i cant wait to see who the unknown draken is and what will happen

You are so evil. Update soon!

Nasta! :) put in 100 votes of Nasta for me please!

Why do I have the sickening feeling that everything is gonna go pear-shaped real soon and the truth will somehow get out and really cause trouble for the boys?