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for The Rise of the Drackens

by StarLightMassacre

person pupcuz
schedule August 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE LET BLAISE BE THE DADDY! HE WAS HARRY'S FIRST AND I WANT HIM TO BE THE DADDY FIRST!
person Sarah
schedule August 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm really enjoying this lovely story! I do have a question though: if Harry gets pregnant from this heat, does he still need another mate? I thought that once you were pregnant your search for mates was over. = ) btw! I love that Max is now one of Harry's mates! I hope that you can catch up on some sleep now!
person thestralhorse
schedule August 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
YAY for Max i am so happy that you are giving us 4 doms it makes me sooo happy, you have no idea =) I loved the twist in the mating and can't wait to see what happens when they all wake up with Harry on the couch with Max while the other two are in the bed!!
schedule August 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Well, I started reading this story yesterday (I couldn't help but click on it merely out of curiosity because of all the reviews and ratings!) Needless to say I was not disappointed :) I was skeptical at first, I will admit. I'm never into the threesome/moresome scene but in your story it works and has good reason and I can stomach it, it's definitely not a bad thing. I'm very curious as to who the fourth mate will be...perhaps Nasta? I really like him. I am slightly disappointed that Max sort of ruined both his and Draco's chance to bond completely with Harry, causing Harry to need a grounding mate when it could have been Max had he let them be, but hey at least Harry has them. I like that your story does not contain a completely effeminate Harry Potter. I would get fed up with some fics because of this, however I haven't tried reading a HP fic in a VERY long time. I like that you're keeping Harry strong and hot-headed. Overall, I am very pleased with this (as I do enjoy a good slash and mpreg), and look forward to the next update.
person djaddict
schedule August 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Well I, for one, enjoyed the 'marmite effect' as you so eloquently put it! ;)

Love the addition of Max and can't wait for the next member of this little family to appear. Still wish it would be Snape though! lol
schedule August 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yay, double and triple yay for Max being the next mate! I just love him so :D And darn, his dick is bigger than Draco and Blaise together? He must be huge all over...
person cassy
schedule August 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
i love this story, and all the different twists. Keep up the good work.
person Kab Bishop
schedule August 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
In the questioning this was said:
person Rissa
schedule August 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I found this story yesterday and read all 18 chapters and even though (Shame on me) I'm usually just a lurker I felt the need to comment on this story and tell you that I love it and can hardly wait for more! :)
person Shanda
schedule August 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
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There goes my happy ending.