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HAH! I am so happy for harry but I think that max need to know alittle more of harry's history. *S* I think but I do not know am I wrong?

I loveee your story!! I started it off a few days ago and totally hooked. Please please update ASAP. Cant wait to see when the dominants get some action with each other ; ) !!
Keep up the good work
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What a beautiful chapter! I love the interplay between the mates and I agree with Harry, Blaise and Max are hot together.

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hey just a note to let you know you were recomended on a post in the forums, I've been reading since the beginning but thought you'd like to know.

I love this story so much, harry with his over protective mates is so cute and the Max and Blaise kissing is so hot!!

OOOhhhhh, Blaise/Max? Yummmm! I'm guessing that age doesn't necessarily have anything to do with where the dominants fall in the hierarchy since Draco and Max still have to see who's on the top rung? Though, since Draco and Max are co-dominants, could that screw things up? I'd like to see how you decide this answer in the story. I also hope that Harry's explanation to Draco is also going to work on Lucius and Narcissa. It's perfectly rational and well thought out, and I hope that they can keep an open mind considering that they had such a hard time with Draco. It makes you wonder though, that since so few wizards and witches seem to have siblings, even in canon, how much trouble those that are hell-bent on keeping bloodlines pure have with having kids. I mean, aside from the Weasleys, very few (not counting muggle-borns because the magic is either there or not)have brothers or sisters. Parvati and Padma Patil, Daphne and Astoria Greengrass, that's it from the school. Most only have two (I consider the Prewetts and Blacks to be like the Weasleys because there's several siblings). I could be wrong, considering that mostly Harry's yearmates were mentioned in cannon. But, it's food for thought.

Sweetmotherofallthatisholyinthisworld.
I was so excited for this update (there was some serious squeeling involved). I felt like this was a more filler chapter? But I like it anywho, I love the relationship orders going on with the dominates (I was wondering how the next sexy times were gonna go) Do you ever plan to write a lemon that doesn't involve Harry? Because I would be completely and totally for that,not that I don't love sweetandfiestysub-harry but the fighting for dominance would be a hot aspect to cover. But blah don't listen if you don't want to.
And for all the people (like the anon you responded to in this chapter) I would much rather you take your sweeeeeet time and get shit right then just rush everything and the story turn out to be a lackluster one.
You just keep doin' what you doin' gurrrrrrrrrrrl, thanks for being awesome :3

I would just like to say that I LOVE your stories, and I am willing too wait however long it takes you for an update because I know that when the next chapter comes out it will be worth the wait. The person who said you were lazy and have abandoned your stories obviously doesn't appreciate good fan fiction. I have read some really awful stories, but yours are fantastic. I will often read The Life and Trials of Harry James Potter-Malfoy over and over again in anticipation of a new chapter, and I always look out for an update in The Rise of the Drackens. Thank you for taking your time to write these amazing stories :)

Oooh, Harry watching Max/Blaise sounds fun, I wonder where Draco will be. I'm thinking Max would be dominant to him, but you never know. What did Harry eat though? I noticed you didn't say. Is it something bad? Looing forward to more!