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for The Rise of the Drackens

by StarLightMassacre

schedule September 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow, everyone is getting butt hurt over the doms hooking up. Its just a story. But while they brought it up in a very obnoxious way, I found a valid question amongst all the bitching. If the male doms have sex with each other does that mean they could give birth to chicks too? Not that I have a problem with it. It would just be an unbelievable amount of children. Even if they were all conceived and birthed at different times. I can only imagine the hassle of raising them, and the doms working their jobs while being pregnant.

Also I can't believe how rude people are in some of their reviews. I do love your writing. I cant remember if I have left a review for this story before. I have been reading it for a while. I have a thing for older men so im glad you included one in the mating. Though if I were looking for a mate I would have gone for Arsenio. Simply because he was the oldest. But thats just me. Some people were so offended by the thought of it though. I mean I love it but its still just a story. Anyways thank you for writing.
person Jazz
schedule September 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Well, whether you have two doms together or not I still love your story. I'm still egerly awaiting the next chapter. and i respect you for sticking with your dicisions. This story is your baby. It's your story and what happens is what YOU want to happen. In the harry potter series, people don't like that snape or dumbledore died and they wish they could change it but thats how J.K wrote it, and the rest of us just have to deal. you know?
anywho, fantastically long chapter and once again i'm looking forward to the next one. :)
person SilverLion
schedule September 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Dracken birth is messy. I hope that being pregnant will stave off the next mating because that'll cause the baby stress, since they don't get the proper nourishment during that time (I know that the dominants appear to feed off of bodily fluids during that time, but nothing was said about the submissives). I would like to think, given Hermione's views on house elf rights, that she wouldn't give a damn about Harry being a Dracken, I just hope that the stress didn't permanently harm the baby.
person QuintiliVare
schedule September 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
How could someone not want to see his mates together?!?!! I am VERY eager to see Max and Blaise together! *fan girl squeals* And I really hope Nasta is the next mate. Either that or have someone come out of nowhere that we haven't seen before.
person Samibear
schedule September 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Is Snapes mate regulas black?
person qwerty
schedule September 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
yay! i was #600!!!
person bdh_girl
schedule September 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Just wanted to say that I am loving this and don't worry about how long it takes. I have a story I didn't update for 2 years. Sometimes things get in the way. Real life, writter's block, computer problems-whatever. If someone is that desperate for you to update and then say they won't read your stories because you're focusing on one of them...they either have no life or don't write themselves and have no clue how hard it can be or both. Keep up the good work. :)
schedule September 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
oooh, this hs me enthralled and now i need more!
person lovelycrazy
schedule September 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
ooooh! Mpreg, creature fic, submissive Harry Potter, with loads of hot and smexy dominant mates...
ahh, just my cup of tea!

Thank you for "The Rise of the Drackens". I am eagerly awaiting to find out whoever Harry's fourth mate is.
It's getting more and more interesting. I hope you stay inspired to write stories that warm your readers' hearts and make them smile/chuckle.

lovelycrazy
person Autumn
schedule September 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I have been reading your stories for a long time. I love them, they are always well written and truly thought out. I just want to thank you for being such a great writer. Also I vote for the baby to be Dracos. I have this silly thing for him. Also I am from the states and weight is measured differently. What do you mean by "seven stone ten pounds"? Have a great night!