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for The Rise of the Drackens

by StarLightMassacre

person blue
schedule September 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
WOW, amazing work!
person Eternal Cosmos
schedule September 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh My God! Amazing chapter! I'm glad Harry finally has his final mate and that he finally got some! LOL I don't know who'll kill Nasta first, though...But I'm sure Harry won't let that happen. He'll tell them that he needed it, both for his next heat and the baby. If they're jealous, they just had to jump him; now Nasta's the one who got to him! I REALLY hope you'll write that heat with the 4 mates. God, that'll be soooooo sexy! Everyone just taking turns...*gah, sorry, I'm drooling...* Well, I can't wait for the next update! Take care!
Eternal Cosmos ^_^
person heartstar
schedule September 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
So will Regulas be really dead like in the book or will harry find him?
person djaddict
schedule September 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
TeeHee, I just knew it would be Nasta. Yea me! lol

You definitely should write the next heat scene, the more the better I always say!



person Anon
schedule September 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Please include Harry's next heat, Id love to read some more Harry loving as Ive come t call it :P
person kristen.katastrophe
schedule September 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I just wanted to say that I'm following both this and the trials of harry james potter-malfoy and i love them both. I was so glad when i found the trials and then I found this and loved it too and realized they had the same author lol. you are a great writer and I am following both stories closely. thank you for putting the out there and I can't wait for the next updates :)
person cynaga
schedule September 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
[ch 23] You are as big a tease as Nast saying that maybe you won't write the next heat! Ha! I'm still catching my breathe from the consumation btn Nast and Harry. WoW~!
schedule September 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
YAY FOR NASTA!!!! I was hoping for him from the beginning. But Look at him NOW!!! *dances the jig* Wow.... its been a while since I reviewed. I have been enjoying reading your story that I just let everyone else review. But I just had to because I was hoping for Nasta. lol. I was like Come on. Give me my Dracken. but as to first who is going to kill Nasta.....hmmm, i think it would be Blaise. I mean come on...there is only so much patience that can be had. And I think he will be the one to blow up and try to shank a dracken.

ANyways, you are doing a HELLUVA job. Keep it up.
person mnfm
schedule September 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This is one of your best chapters. I always liked Nas and was afraid it was going to be left out.
Please write about the next heat, I can't wait to see how they manage to deal with a Harry! Please update soon!
person Jazz
schedule September 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Damn how'd you know I'd skip ahead?
I think you should write Harry's next heat. it'll be the first one where harry has all his mates and I'd like to know the "dom order" if you know what I mean.
I thin Draco would lunge for Nasta first, he always seems to be the most violent one out of all of them. But Max would be a close second.
also, NASTA NASTA NASTA NASTA NASTA NASTA! :D *confetti and rice all around* ...*i don't get it either*
Anyway, love you, love your story, and as always i look forward to the next chapter.