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for The Rise of the Drackens

by StarLightMassacre

person Wolfmistress
schedule September 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I loved how you finished the teaser from chapter 22. I hope Harry and Henley remain in contact. However, I do hate that one of my faves, Arsenio, didn't make the cut. Oh well, maybe he will have better luck in the future with another submissive, possibly the one in New Zealand? I do still have one burning question - what was Draco so worried about in the library when Harry was going through the books? I may have overlooked the explanation, but this question is driving me a little distracted. I hope you do update soon, but I understand how real life interferes with writing.

BTW, have you decided if this is going to be a single chick or a multiple? Twins would be nice, one dark-haired with blue eyes and the other tow-headed, or even a russet, with green eyes.

As for who will kill Nasta first, I think they will all gang up on him, but Harry will protect him. Also, by all means write about the heat, you do not necessarily have to go into detail, but some mention would be nice.

Until the next posting.
person jamie
schedule September 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love this story! Can't wait to read the rest.
person jj
schedule September 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Love this story. hope there's more to it.
person Juda
schedule September 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Great story. I am looking forward to finding out what happens next. Here is a piece of fanart for you. I couldn't get the idea of trying to figure out what the Harry and his mates looked like......
http://i44.photobucket.com/albums/f18/Ryuuri-chan/DSCF3013-1.jpg
person Samibear
schedule September 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
That was a Awsome sex since really. Lol I hope that regulas will be alive,, that would soo great. But then it would be sad cuz its like where has he been. Lol sorry my brain goes off and I'm like whats gonna happen!! Any can't wait for ur next update
person Random-Death-Eater-Number-5
schedule September 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
max will be the one to kill him if ANYBODY does ;) please write the next heat.
Will kreacher be showing up in the next few chapters?
Do you have any name idea's for the baby?

okay questions are over i love your story even if i hardly ever comment...oh well I hipe everything goes well with your vacation bring home many rabid plot bunnies :D
person Jaylynn
schedule September 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I just wanted to say I really like this story and have reread it twice already. I really hope they don't hurt Nasta, I really like him and I would hate to see him hurt. I can't wait to know who is the father and how Draco's parents take the news. Finding out they will be having grandchildren could really soften the blow. *hinthint*. I could see then wanting a rush wedding or bonding ceremony though so the children wouldn't be born out of wedlock.
person SGOU
schedule September 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This is a fantastic story. Inspiring. I really like your Draco, Harry and Blaise, but I LOVE your original characters. Thank you so much for taking the time and energy to write this. I have enjoyed each and every chapter and I hope there is a lot more to come because I really can't get enough.

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schedule September 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow!!! I just stayed up all night and read every single chapter of this story and I cannot wait for more!!!
I was hoping for Max AND Nasta and you didn't disappoint. :D Now I will have to check out your other works. If they are as good as this I see more sleepless nights ahead!
schedule September 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
i think that draco will be first and that you should writ the heat the others got heats.