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I recently started reading stories on Adultfanfiction.net and just came across Rise of the Drackens. I read all 24 chapters today and really enjoyed it. You hit on some of my favorite kinks with D/s and Draco/Harry. Will we ever see Harry meeting Blaise's mom? What about the confrontation Draco seems to be expecting with the Malfoy's? BTW - one thing I'm a bit confused about. In an earlier chapter, Draco told Astoria that she would be hearing from Lucius that the betrothal was ended since Draco is involved with someone. Yet in a later chapter Draco hasn't told his parents about his creature status or his relationship with Harry. Why would Lucius have ended the betrothal with Astoria (and he apparently did since she is now betrothed to some guy in Spain) if he didn't know about Draco's relationship? It doesn't seem in character for Lucius to end the betrothal just on Draco's say so since the whole having a Malfoy heir is so important thing. Anyway, I'm looking forward to more chapters.

I just want to say that your story is amazing. I started it yesterday and I haven't been able to close the screen since. I just keep re-reading it over and over and over. Usually in a creature!Harry story, I hate how the author suddenly makes him submissive and suddenly without a personality. You didn't do that though, which I really enjoy. I don't think that someone who offed a dark lord could be suddenly and magically become a piece of play dough, personality wise. Also, OCs more often than not make me lose interest in the story immediately and close it. It's something magical and special when I find a fic with OCs that not only don't annoy me, but I end up liking more than some of the main characters. I adore Max and Nasta, especially Max. I give you a standing ovation. You just did magic. This is definitely turning into one of my favorite fics ever. I eagerly await the next chapter.
-baka_onna2003

OMG I never really read a story that isn't completed, and most of the time when I search for one I make sure it is completed because I have a habit of reading a full story in its entirety in one sitting. I guess that I am a dork, but I absolutely love to read and find it frustrating to find an absolutely fantastic story such as this one. It completely blew my mind because I took a chance on reading it knowing full well that it wasnt finished. I sincerily hope you will continue to finish this one and write others even though I believe you had stated you had adopted the story. I just wanted to let you know that I have read thousands of fanfictions and I never really truely leave a review due to the fact that I have never came across a story that has gripped me like this one has, plus, I feel I really have no right in criticizing another persons work when my own is less than perfect, but I wanted to say that what I have read of this story is...... wow I really do not have the right words to express how I feel about it, and please I beg of you to finish this one if not for yourself then for the many fans you have hooked with 24 amazing chapters. Please email me at loki_freak_420@yahoo.com in your own personal time if you have it. I would like to talk to you I cant really say.... face to face but you know what I mean.

Your sincerest newest fan,

Celeste McLauren

not gonna lie, im not looking forward to the ron-harry confrontation. ron's a twot and i don't want harry to get hurt or upset. :( but thank you for the chapter. it was delightful.

Him I wonder is it a girl?! Maybe a boy Draco would want a boy. *S*

wonder how this is going to play out? I'm also surprised that Ron hasn't got his ass beat by his family for acting like that towards Harry especially now that he is preggers.

Yay for Nasta! So, I was wondering why Harry would go into heat after he's already pregnant? It's so he can consume semen for the health of the baby in large quantities?

Omg! I just discovered this story yesterday and it is soooo amazing! I absolutely ADORE your original characters! Especially Nasta so you can imagine how excited I was when he became the fourth mate! The only problem I have with this story is that there is no more! So... Please update as fast as you possibly can! I'm practically dying from anticipation!

Yay it was Nas. w00t. Definitely, definitely write the next heat! Hey, i was wondering... if Har gets more cum n stuff from his mates, will his morning sickness be a bit better? Also, I'm glad they don't expect him to just stay home. Yay for liberated dracons... also, Draco REALLY needs to tell his parents.
Ron and Har huh... oh, this IS going to be awkward. I just hope Ron isn't stupid enough to get violent.

You're an amazing writer. I check back every single day in anticipation of the next chapter. Stupid real life ;) But you do what you have to to take care of yourself; thank you for sharing your talent and giving us what little free time you have. It is very much appreciated!