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for The Rise of the Drackens

by StarLightMassacre

schedule October 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm so glad that Narcissa and Lucius are okay with it! I hope Harry doesnt lose the baby. That's just horrible. Ron will get his....
schedule October 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
It's not really a no review policy its more of the fact that I haven't really found a story worth reviewing. I really don't like reviewing other stories for the sake of helping the person because I am in no position to be giving criticism when my own work needs a helping hand, but I love reviewing fantastic stories such as yours. And please if you have the time please read one that I am currently in the process of writing its called Underneath Your Skin. I will welcome any input givin as long as it is done with respect.
person Lily
schedule October 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love this story, it is absolutely wonderful. I paused for a second when you said it was 29 degrees, then remembered most European countries go by Celsius rather than Fahrenheit (as we do here is the States). By the way, you have a beautiful country. I did a study abroad in England in 2009 and visited Wales while I was there, absolutely gorgeous. Anyway, I really hope Harry does not lose the baby. I can't wait for the next chapter!!
person Anon
schedule October 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapter! I feel so bad for Nasta always being attacked when he doesn't do anything wrong, i am glad that he and Draco have the dominance issue out of the way, now Max just needs to figure out where he fits with the Draco and Nasta. I can't wait!!
person Jammerk
schedule October 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I can't say enough how much I love this story!! I check multiple times a day, everyday, so o don't miss any chapters! Which I did miss back around the high teems, you updated quicker then I looked, and had two to read! Anyway! Love this chapter! So sad, but soooo good! Can't wait for the next update!
PS: I laughed when you said it was hot at 29 degrees. Then I realized it was c not f lol. I'm from the US, it's how we think lol.
person Andrea Readwolf
schedule October 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
HIGHLY amused at the Malfoys reactions! ^__^ Sad about the baby. Do hope it makes it--if only for Ron's livelihood. With luck, Dumbles managed to sneak Ron out of the castle for good; otherwise, I'm not thinking his chaces for making it to his 19th birthday are so good. Or is it 18th? [frowns] What month are they in right now? Oh! Poor Snapes! I swear, sometimes I just want him to mate with Harry and get it over with, but then...he makes such a good parental/mentor role, too. :/

And, oh, look! You updated L&T, too! Oh, my! How lucky are we? [grins] Hope the weather cools off for you some. Personally hate the heat--tis why I moved away from Florida. Not that Seattle doesn't get hot...for, oh, say, three days out of the year......
person jingko
schedule October 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
LOL 29 degrees? I've lived in places that have hit 44 in the summer and then -7 in the winter and now i'm living in a desert, and about to move to the mountains! so i'm bound to get colder >< (-8.7, with an all time low of -30.6) i would LOVE to live in Whales! sounds great! sheep O.O i think GB in general would be great to live in. at any rate (sorry for teasing you about the weather try Hong Kong! it was only 21 degrees at night but 100% humidity, BLAH. and i had to use a converter so if the temps are a bit off i'm sorry)
will they find Regulus? and what about Ron? will he be killed or just tormented and he becomes another 'dark' wizard? and what about the parents meeting everyone? O.o id be a fly on the wall for that one.
person Mari
schedule October 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
You are are killing me, but you update fairly frequently so I'll try and hold on. I'm not that surprised that Ron lost it, I hope that Ginny and Hermione get wind of what he did and when Molly finds out he punched a pregnant Harry, I'd give even odds she's as bad as a bunch of dominant Drakens any day. I really hope the baby is ok Harry has been through enough. I am in California and my husband is in the UK in business and bitching mightly about the heat wave too. Thank you for the update!
person Jazz
schedule October 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Love ya :3 although I'm worried about Harry and the baby. I KNEW Ron was bad news!
schedule October 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love this story!