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for The Rise of the Drackens

by StarLightMassacre

person Vana
schedule October 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love this story!! I started reading it when you were on about chapter 10 and I haven
person Jazz
schedule October 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
:3
person Seraphiccandy21
schedule October 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hey hun, I know I havn't reviewed before and remained stealthily in the backround but I would just like to say that even us silent types in the corner are enjoying your work. When people ask u to update soon it just means that you have really captured their interest and they are enjoying the fic so that they can't stand to have it interupted by an ending,lol :P At first I thought this was going to be one of *those* creature fics.We have all seen them before.. Shallow characters, soul mate induced pregnancy,emo emo emo, incredible-never-before-in-over-a-thousand-years-seen-power, stunning beauty, everybody falling for Harry, last minute rescues and tears and....vampires, they always have to include f-ing vampires ;____________; . But yeah, yours is not like that and therefor I thank you. Especially the part about not including a vampire XD
schedule October 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
You make the characters so realistic
yet not totally OOC

I can't wait to see how this turns out


also on a completely unrelated note 100 Fahrenheit is not that bad when you live in southwestern US especially in Arizona where I've seen it go 110 and above
=p
person Karma2ualwayz
schedule October 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Where do i start? Just....~sighz like the fan girl i am~ this story is so good, im actually breaking my rule and keeping up with it. Normally WIP's get on my nerves cause the author updates all crazy like and i can't keep up. but you do it just right! it gives me enough time to let my imgination wonder and guess what your going to do next, and let me tell you i've been right in my guessing about two times. lol which is so good! This keeps me on my toes, i love it! I tried reviewing once...i think chapter 24 (where you left us at the cliffhanger) but it didnt go through. So sad, i had all these questions, but now all i have are comments....whichi think can still be put in question form. lol
~I love how your bringing the families into the story now, i actually think draco and blaise's family will take it....eh maybe semi well but id love a little senerio for Max and Nasta's families. I don't know why but im thinking all the families just pop in on the same day.....while harrys in heat, just to make things extra awkward.lol even mrs weasly might show up on that day to pimp smack her son for being such a prick and just has to see harry to see hows he doing....
~Hermiones finally coming around ,yay for mione, i wonder if she's just sticking with ron because he's abusing her? and/or she feels that she has to stay with him because he's her first wizard boyfriend with a family that loves her and accepts her muggle backround and she doesnt want to lose that? mmm just spitballing that
~And finally! *Gushes* just keep up the mushy lovey crazy random goodness! XD!!
schedule October 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I really love this story! I will try to wait patiently for the next chapter but this story is so addicting it is extremely hard to do!
person abnagbeyl
schedule October 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Lol, I know the feeling. So what's the name of the fic your waiting on?
person lisha711
schedule October 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I don't care how long it takes to update your story. I will happily wait the time it takes because your story is intriguing, has plot, and actually follows a timeline. I'm sure other stories have that as well, but when you take the extra time to actually think about what your writing it comes across as even better.

That being said, I love your story and will faithfully check each day to see if you have updated even if you haven't. There's nothing like going back to certain chapters and rereading them to get acquainted with them again. Keep up the awesome work, and don't get burned out ^.~
schedule October 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I have so loved this story so far, please tell me this is going to continue?? :D
schedule October 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love it when you update, it makes my day. But I do understand that writing takes time. I know myself that I have people yelling at me to publish another chapter, but I wouldn't be happy publishing something I wasn't completely satisfied with, so just ignore all the others and write when you want. I love this story, and Life and Trials, and when there is a new chapter, I practically want to scream for joy. ( I don't, because my neighbours already thinbk I'm crazy enough) When i've finished with the new chapter, I go back and read all my fave bits in all the other chapters. I love how sweet and caring all Harry's mates are, and, might I add, HOTTTT!!! I love Henley, please tell me he'll crop up again? Harry needs all the love he can get, lol. I adore how Harry keeps all his mates in line, it makes me lol when he wrangles them all. And I really want something good to come for Snape, he just makes me want to cry. I know you've said it won't happen, but I really want for Regulus to somehow be alive and for Severus to have a chick out there somewhere. I know it won't happen, but I can't help but want it. Severus needs the love! I adore your writing style. I don't read threesomes/moresomes usually, but this one really pulled me in and refused to let go. Please continue writing, I will be here, being patient and fantasising about being a submissive Draken with Henley as my dominant. Oh, that's another thing I want to see, Henley with his own submissive. By the way, I think I'm just missing it or something, but can I please have a detailed description of Henley, so I can have a clearer mental picture? It's probably already in there somewhere and I'm missing it, but I'm having a little trouble picturing him. Thank you. (PS, sorry for the longness of the review, I had alot to say)