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for The Rise of the Drackens

by StarLightMassacre

person mnfm
schedule October 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
You worked so hard, but its been great! Best chapter ever! Take a break, but don't forget us!
person Anon
schedule October 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapter, i loved the heat scene and Draco still being difficult about the other two being more dominant that him. I can't wait to read more!
person Solice364
schedule October 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Heneley would be shuch a cool guy to end up being one of harrys childerens mates down the road it would have to be one of the early sets but it would be shuch a funny thing like Nasta AND Harry all over again if you know what I mean ....anyway glad the babys fine in the story and am a little disapointed by how Nasta was Dominate just because Max can cook.
person Jammerk
schedule October 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
So sorry to hear about your week! I knew it had been a while since your last update, but I didn't realize nine days! So sad for us, but rl gets in the way sometimes. An ok know this probably sounds mean, but I couldn't help but laugh at Harry in his heat, but while he was still recovering! To imagine Daniel on the floor screaming and throwing things, that's priceless! And then Draco, not wanting to be penetrated by Max and Nasta. Over all awesome chapter, and you've made my past few days! Hope things go better for you!!
person mari
schedule October 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This is the story I most look forward to reading on this site and am quite addicted to. Thank you for the update I'm glad such a hellish heat is over and they came out the other side ok. I hope your week gets better. Thank you for the effort you put into this and for sharing with us.
schedule October 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Another AWESOME chapter! But
person SilverLion
schedule October 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for the compliment, and the idea. BTW, do you know why giant spiders are perfect for Thanksgiving? Everybody gets to have a drumstick. Anyhoo, I'm guessing that with the two-month period between heats, that Harry will only get that two months before it hits him again? Is that enough time for a body to recover from pregnancy? Especially Dracken pregnancy as you've described it? Also, will there be any sex when poor Harry's not in heat? I mean, sex to have babies is all well and good, but the heat takes a lot of the fun and intimacy out of it.
person Jazz
schedule October 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
You used my name in your story! :D
I'm sorry for your troubles, and you may not be satisfied with this chapter but look at it this way; it's more than a decent length, it covers Harry's heat, you left it off at a point where the next part can be whatever plotpoint you want, and you've gotten the chapter out in a little over a week dispite all the crap that's been going on where you live and the ass-nuggets giving you bad reviews.
Thank you for working so hard.
schedule October 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
hearing the back story on the mates families was sweet but i'm glad Har doesn't have more mates to get or heats to suffer through for a bit. That was hellish.
Will Har be continuing with school work, not classes but school work while he's pregnant? It'd give hims something to do since he's not going to be mobile for a while.
Oh, I'm so glad Har will bbe able to bring Sev some peace. He deserves it.
schedule October 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Do you have a mailing list? Poor Harry, I hope nothing more happens to his baby.